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This is a really good first chapter! Naruto would rush into a promise like that. >:) hehehe


I really like Naruto's and Kyuubi's developing relationships. It makes alot of sense towards the series and I find the closing distance between them (and the reason for it) believable. I'm looking forward not to chapter two. ^^ Keep up the good work!

thats really good i love this relationship you've formed between naruto and kyuubi, and at the end with the joke that was pricless i could so see naruto doing that with how oblivious he is i think he should be promoted to general oblivious just like me. can't wait for the next chapter JA NE.

Well this is off to an interesting start, I am really curious as to how you are going to continue with it.

Well-written and original piece. Nice to see that anyone besides me noticed the fic possibility of Naruto's promise to Shion, hehe :D. A very good first fic! More please!