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WTH!? O_o
Talk about a shocker, but I think its Lee. >.>

lol i pity lee. i really do, keep up the good work ^^ update soon
thank you

I love this story, it just gets better and better. Kakashi is sooo cute!

Amazing. Honestly.

Though the buildup is just killing me!

There is one thing I'm sure of though. Tsunade's bet really has nothing to do with the books, does it?

I have really been enjoying this story. You manage to make the romantic connections while still staying true to the nature of the characters themselves.

What you did with Neji is especially impressive and made me incredibly happy.

Your gift for description and getting into the mind of the characters in your story is stunning, I must say.

I'm really hoping that you update soon. The anticipation is driving me up a wall! :P

Plus, and I'm pulling an Ino here, I want Sakura to get some sexing soon!

Another absolutely stunning chapter... I have never been sooo happy to see a new chapter of a story.. I think this is my fav of all time.. That's saying so much too
Can't wait to see more..
Thanks

Yes!! Thank you so much for updating! I absolutely love that Kakashi is really starting to think of Sakura seriously and that Naruto will be coming back into the picture. Maybe he'll be able to bring some needed brutal honesty to the situation but I can't wait to find out!

Just a couple comments here. One, Ino is getting more and more annoying as each chapter goes along. There's a fine line between being a considerate friend and a downright nosy busybody, and Ino is way beyond being the nosy one. She doesn't want to know things for curiousity's sake, but to know things as in 'your business is my business' and 'you better tell me all of it or else'. What kind of friend is that? If I was Sakura, I would have already given the blonde bimbo a chakra-laced punch a long time ago for constantly being in her face about every little detail in her life. Her character needs to be toned down a lot. Seriously.
The second thing is about Kakashi and who he last dated. It's a little confusing when you say in this recent chapter that the last person he dated was only a few months ago and that all his friends hated her, yet in chapter 6 you wrote that Asuma says it's been a few years since Kakashi was out with someone and all of them hated her. So, which is right? The way you worded makes it seem like they are talking about the same person, but not. Asuma says that Kakashi hasn't really been with anyone, however as each chapter progresses, he's suddenly been out with all these women. It's a little inconsistent. You should really go back over your work and make sure you are following what you wrote before, and not add things as you go along without being sure it doesn't conflict with what you have already written.

i get so happy every time this story is updated. i really do like it. please update soon.

Yay! Another wonderful update! I feel bad for Kakashi and Sakura, so in denial about what they want... fools! Update soon! ^_^v

SHANNAROU! UPDATE!!!

That was awesome. I especially liked Sakura's talk with Pakkun. And I was surprised to find out that that one chick was a jounin. Seriously, what ninja doesn't understand that you can't just bail on your teammates in a time of need? Human OR canine? And it's not like we're even talking about normal dogs; these can talk and laugh and feel hurt. I'd have dumped the bitch, too.

And I am seriously enjoying Kakashi's internal angst. Talk about denial.

I feel kind of bad for Sakura. By now, I'd have gone to Tsunade and told her where to shove it, midnight shifts or not. But then, Kakashi wouldn't have a reason to stick around . . . damn, now I'M conflicted!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

-Dina