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for Double Edged

by nimblnymph

person mikey
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
realy realy like the story man jsut read chap 15 LOVE the ending btw its cool to cause i normaly wouldint read this pairing since usaly the pair jsut doesint seem right to me but you manage to make it work sence theres the whole *mission* behinde sakuras actions yet it seems like there gonna go a bit farther then either of them intended i just love the way this is palying out keep it up man i just cant get over how good a ending for the chap that was lol
person Mademoiselle
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! He kissed her on the lips!

AND his saying to the cookies.
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear Nimblnymph,

Dammit. I hate losing.

On the other hand, it meant a new chapter, so did I really lose? *ponders*

Let's revisit the highlights, shall we? Let's see . . . first off, when I clicked on the chapter, and the first thing I read is the words, "You lose." I nearly fell out of my chair.

Two: If these magically delicious cookies happen to exist in your real life, I'd gladly do just about anything for the recipe. Homemade cookies with dark chocolate-I drooled just reading about them. If said recipe exists, please write it up in Dummies-style. I have Sakura's cooking issues, and sometimes it transfers over to my attempts at baking.

Three: I loved Anko's appearance in this chapter. I could SO see her throwing the whole damn coffemaker!

Four: The kiss . . . *swoons* Omigod, that was delicious. And clever; I never thought of using a hitai-ate as a blindfold. In my experience, the metal plate gets in the way.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next,

Your undying fangirl,

Blackwidina
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*wails* You reviewed for me on the tenth, and here it is twelfth, with no update.

AND IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! *shakes fist* Noooooo! What have I done???

*whimper* Please update soon . . . yours is one of two fics that I check religiously. I can't wait to see what happens next. Tell you what-you work on yours, I'll work on mine. *goes to open Word* Bet I beat you to it!

Waiting with bated breath! -Dina

schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh MAN!!! Please update soon. This chapter was just hawt.
person puppydog
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Keep going!
person LadyPiro
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They're so kawaii!!!
person Mademoiselle
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Two new chapters! YAY!
I love Sakura's shirt-dress, that was priceless!
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Kakashi is o hot!!! Update soon...PLEASE!!!!
Great fic! I just love it!!!
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a chapter