rate_review Reviews

So cute! I wanna see this date Kakashi is rushing for! SO HURRY UP! I COMMANDE YOU!!!

That was an awesome chapter! I thought it was excellently played, from beginning to end. To be truthful, though, there was one part that literally had me slumped in my chair, giggling madly: the POV change, where it's revealed that Kakashi sabotaged the dinner. That floored me. I was all feeling amused/sorry for Sakura for burning the dinner(which was the conclusion I'd expected, actually), but to find out it wasn't even her fault-that was great!

You're an awesome writer. I love your dialogue most of all, and your sense of humor's along some of the same lines as my own, which is awesome. I think you keep the characters in character pretty well, too. Oh, and your plot twist are divine. I was actually kind of thoughtful when Sakura was talking about why she likes mysteries, and the point was brought home when I found out Kakashi was the one whodunit.

And I'll be thinking of your story as I wait for the next installment: Will Sakura figure out Kakashi's duplicity? Will Kakashi make it on time for once? Will Sakura find 'The Dress?' Will Kakashi kiss her in the restaurant, where he's 'safe?' Which, by the way, would be a hell of a lot more original that what I'd thought up. If it were my fic Bitch Nights, I'd have done something kinky like have Sakura offer Kakashi a blindfold, and tell him he's out of excuses.

But I ramble. Please, ignore me, and continue to do a wonderful job!

Your humble fangirl,

Blackwidina

Oh my god....this story is wonderful, you are wonderful. Marry me!

Your story is great! Keep it up!

hey i love this story! i read all of it in just one sitting yesterday!lol
well theres nothing i can say coz the plot is great!
bt theres just one thing...i think the development of the pair is quite slow,

but i have no problem with anything! so just write and make us all happy!lol
nice job! im a fan;b

hey, just to tell you that im really enjoying this story. i always look forward to reading new chapters and i think that you are a great writer. please keep updating,
best wishes xxx

Every single time I see that there is a new chapter.. I jump up and down and do the happy dance... I love this story and I can't wait for more... Thanks so much for keeping up on it..

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

So, like, wow. Complete and total WOW, is all I can come up with at this point. I've read from the beginning and just wow... This is insanely funny, up there with the Dave Barry fiction novels level of funny (which has been known to send poor souls to the ER with head gashes after falling from chairs because they were laughing so hard). And the dates, absolutely to die for, just keep setting the proverbial bar higher and know how jealous you've made me of fictional characters. The part about making up the dialogue to the movie in the woods was brilliant but I loved the paintball-training date. I am just still completely stunned by how awesome this is (and I so totally mean that in a positive way). I absolutely love the back and forth between Sakura and Kakashi and love your story. oh, and I am so totally looking forward to reading more. Really, truly awesome work.

I've vaited this chapter so much! It was really good, I especially liked Sakura and Kakashi interactions. So give us some new treat soon, please!