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for Double Edged

by nimblnymph

person Anon
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I originally skipped over this story a few times while browsing this site. I noticed it,it's just that, based on the description, I was worried that it was going to be another "they're in love and trying to get into each others pants from the beginning for no apparent reason" type of story... Those stories can be fine, but I like a bit more meat in the stories I read; some sort of explanation why they go from "student/teacher" to "OMG <3".

I am pleased to admit that my original assessment was incorrect. Once I started reading, I just couldn't stop. The story is well written, the characters are well portrayed, there's a nice mix of seriousness and humor, and the only thing I can find wrong with it is the fact that I've run out of chapters to read!

You can be sure I'll be keeping an eye on this. =)
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. Thank you aff.net for eating half of my review. Again. (My reviews must be delicious!)

Anyway, long review short: I originally had reservations about this story, but found myself hooked once I actually started reading it. You can be sure I'll be keeping an eye on this one. =)
person Kiddykat005
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving where this story is going! Can't wait for the next chapter! :-P
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely ADORE this story. I love all the witty dialogue. I have to agree with another reviewer. The "walk me home because I am terrfied of perverts" line was genius. I love Kakashi, so I was delighted to find a story about him, that didn't involve a man. Don't get me wrong, I actually have been addicted to Yaoi, thanks to a friend on here, Jade Rose, you should check her out, if you like that sort of thing. Anyways, I always like finding a good story, as I am a stay at home mom, who loves to read, and dabbles in writing, but it sucks being at the mercy of a fellow writer, and waiting on the edge of my seat waiting for updates. ^.^ Well, I look forward to reading more. Hopefully it isn't too long before I get to read more of your wonderful work!! kisses!!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story! Can't wait until the next chapter!
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Can't wait! Lol. It's so funny about the whole rumor thing. It travels from who first to who and then to whoever. xD Write soon!
~ Mellie Is KWii! ~
person Elayne
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yey, new chapter! I had a horrible week and this chapter came like something from heaven, dunno... I badly needed a distraction from my thoughts. Keep up the good work its so nice to see a new chapter.
person padrai
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting another chapter! I truly tried to look for mistakes but just didn't see any. I enjoy reading the playful sides of all of your characters! This is truly fun to read and the teasing between Kakashi and Sakura is hilarious! And excited Asuma was adorable! Thank you again and I can't wait for your next chapter!
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your story is really gettin under way and makingg progress with your main pairing. I wonder what that third date will entain for Sakura. This story is getting interesting as of how Sakara will try to complete yet still leave Kakashi in the dark, a Kakashi moreover who already suspect her motives, very enjoyable. Oh and are you in canon, with Asuma? Oh and will there be a NaruxHina side development, ah yes and what is the ulterior motive behind Tsunade´s gamble? So many question that have to be answered, so ... update!!
person puppydog
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Keep it up! This story is getting good!