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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Keep it coming because its getting pretty good!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MAN this story has me waiting on every word! It has so much potential and really showed up. Minus the ten things I hate about you based paintball fight if that's where that came from. I didn't like heath, but that was just me lol. Plus it wasn't too original since you had already got it from there. Otherwise, every inch of it has been suspenseful and drama-filled. Great job, let's go on a new chapter too ^_^!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another chapter!! I'm sorry that you had difficulties and hope that there is an easier time of it for the remaining story. You're flow is nice and the side story of Genma and Shizune is cute. I may be diehard KakaSaku but I have to admit that Genma/Shizune are a lot of fun as well. You're teasing is awesome and it is a real pleasure to read your work. Again, I can't see any flaws, but maybe I'm just enjoying the story too much? Congrats on this chapter and I'll be looking forward to your next!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg soo good i love this so far i can wait for an update its just so good.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what the heck are you ranting about? this chapter was great!! It was so romantic and the atmospere between Sakura and Kakashi was so romantic, so lease continue with this story soon. You seem to be inserting a nice little side-story in your main story,and I am looking forward to their groth, and speaking of growth,I am also looking forward to Lee`s quest for Sakura´s heart. Please update soon, for this story is quite exceptional.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can feel them falling for each other really hard. It's just a matter of time.
Rox
Rox
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It is really well written and everyone is very in character. I'm so happy that Guy and Lee are in it too. I can't wait for more!
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, as always.
The only issue is that you have a page streacher.......D;
I have to copy and paste it to notebook just so I can read it.
The only issue is that you have a page streacher.......D;
I have to copy and paste it to notebook just so I can read it.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all have my sencere congratulations. I was surprised of the quality of this fanfic, the language (as in words used, phrase construction), after reading one or two before this one. You did amazingly good job with your characters too. They're pretty realistic as in close to the ones in the anime. Even the time of the development of the story is nice. Its not a three sentences rush into the bed or nothing romantic or teasing at least at all. I really enjoyed reading these three chapters and I cannot wait for more.
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and cute story! Please continue!!