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Oh man, please please let Hinata stand up for herself as a subplot! I was getting all jazzed up about that during Naruto's tirade. It was rather distracting from the sakura/kakashi plot. But in a good way! lol

Just a couple of comments. When Kakashi and Sakura leave the other couple's apartment, you wrote that Kakashi had slipped his arm around her shoulders twice. It was not in consecutive sentences, but only a few lines after you first wrote it. A very little mistake. Second, when Ino walks into the apartment, I really doubt that Kakashi would have been facing in her direction while pulling up his mask for her to see him. He's very careful about people catching a glimpse of his face, so he most likely would have turned his back on her to prevent any thing from being seen (especially that hard-on he had from his activities with Sakura). Third, it was a little disturbing to read a sixteen year-old girl think about who she wanted as her first lover and maybe being her only lover. It comes across as if Sakura's a slut-in-waitng who has a list of potential lovers she would like to go through. Her character is not like that, and not many real young girls think in that direction as well (I sure as hell didn't when I was that age). I do like this story, however there is something wrong with a sixteen year-old thinking along those lines. Maybe you didn't word it correctly, but it is unacceptable either way.

..............I come back to the Internet after over two months of not having any, and this chapter is my what I find?

I could kiss you.

THANKYOUSOVERYMUCHFORSUCHANAWESOMECHAPTERYOU'RETHEMOSTAWESOMEAUTHORINTHEWORLD!!!!

*pants for a few moments, then takes a deep breath*

Seriously, I love the way you blended the series' events in with your story, and Naruto . . . god, he's so priceless. As subtle as being hit in the face with a dump truck.

I can not WAIT to see how things go. Seriously, this ties with one other fic as being my favorite in the fandom, and I STILL CHECKED YOURS FIRST! Because I love you and you're awesome.

I humbly grovel in your presence.

Dina out

I'm DYING to know what happens next ! <3
Please keep updating, you're awesome ! :D

Oh My God! You have to update, have just read this entire story in one sitting, I was enraptured.

I love the whole relationship between Sakura and Kakashi, you can really see them develop from student/teacher to more. :D Fantastic job, will be checking in every day from now to check for a new chapter :)

Keep on writing, I can't wait to see what happens next ^_^

Hey nimblnymph! Just started reading this two days ago and have finished it already...you sure leave us readers gasping for more :D

Have to say I love your style of writing, very descriptive and the characters are all sticking nicely to their personalities from the manga/anime (not sure whether you watch or read or both lol) Kakashi is by far my fave character, who can resist a man in a mask? Sometimes I notice little spelling mistakes (heal for heel etc) but to be honest you could have far worse, and I have seen far worse, and I would still read this to the end because of the portrayal of their relationship...Very sweet and sexy, I love it!

AWESOME story !!!
Best story I've read since "Stripped bare", and that is saying something seeing as I'm not that much into reading in the first place, and that both stories drives me mad in pure anticipation ! Please, for the love of all that's good in this world, DON'T STOP WRITING !!!! You've got some serious skill and I can't (probably a mutual feeling amongst readers) WAIT to read the rest of this story. I'm down to chap. 21, sorry for not reviewing sooner, but it's a rare event -.-

From me to you; pure bliss from an awesome author !

Oh man, this chapter was absolutely painful to read! No matter what Kakashi came up with at the end of the date it completely didn't make up for what he made her go through in the beginning (making her wait 2 hours, failing to actually have breakfast with her (who cares he brought her a pastry?), forcing her to change her clothes after she spent time getting ready, and still keeping everything a secret... you have no idea how much I wanted to jump into the story and make her ditch his a**, bet or no bet). I'm sure the situation would have been salvageable later on and gosh was he being annoying (and it would have so served him right to have gone through the trouble of planning and stealing the projector to find that she wasn't going to put up with his sh*t).

Beyond my annoyance at what Sakura had to put up with, I also found it strange you have her again even considering trying to steal the individual book, after the discussion with Ino et al re: what a bad idea it would be to steal the books piecemeal. Doesn't she realize that would give away her motives? (I understand you're trying to create drama for the characters but it didn't make sense to me that she would still be aiming to steal the individual book...)

sorry, just to clarify as I guess AFF doesn't automatically associate a chapter with the review...the review I just left was for Chapter 8...

OMG!!! When I checked to see if you had updated I ended up spilling my damn mountain dew all down my tank top and on my leather chair...lol should have seen me was trying to link up and read and clean the chair and change tops at the same time...needless to say my boyfriend has told me that everytime one of my favorite authors updates it's hilarious to see my actions. LOVE LOVE what you have done with it I like the what you said about Kakashi and emotional situations, thought that was really good...Can't wait till your next update this chapy felt like a teaser lol
GREAT JOB