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for Double Edged

by nimblnymph

person Chaney
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay it's official i'm in love with you! I nearly squealed the house down when I saw you updated. My boyfriend was laughing his ass off at me. lol Please please keep up the good work I like the whole foreplay thing you have going on, it keeps ppl like me hanging and wishing on one hand that it keeps up and on the other for them to just screw already. This is one of my all time favorites on aff I know it's kinda normal for ppl to say this, but please update soon...even though you just updated...PLEASE
person anastasia
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is really good I can't wait to read more of it you really know how to keep the characters in character I feel like there acting just as they would on the show and I like how you didn't just jump into the sex part of it like a lot of other people do. Anyways great job can't wait for the next update.
person Guice
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO, I've been reading this from the get-go and just never got around to reviewing it for some reason... which is odd 'cuz I always review. But I just wanted to say that this has probably been my favorite fic EVER, and I've read tons of them. I lvoe the fact that the relationship is portrayed as an actual relationship... something that takes time to get to where it's good... meaning I'm glad you didn't jump right on the sex train (and the way you used minor-characters to fill in that gap was a great plan XD). erm... yeah, I just lvoe everything about this. I impatiently wait between each break in the chapters... XD I check every day to see if you've posted (which is silly, but I lvoe this that much).

I truly can't wait for the next chapter, I'm interested to see Kakashi's reaction to Sakura's growth, and of course the Naruto plot bunny... gah, I can't wait!
person kris
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is HOT an sooo adictive! Cant wait for next chapter! xxx
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! Great Job making it HOT. woooo... i need some water.

;)
person djserani
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It has taken me almost a week to read this story so far. I have to say that I am really enjoying it. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
person Ashlee crazy fan artist
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to stop reading this story. The imagery gets stuck in my head and I'm unable to draw without it turning into your scenes >_< expect more fanart from me. This was an amazing chapter!
person Chaney
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you, I really, really love you...Please keep up the GREAT work hope to see some more when your ready
person mmartini
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love this! The lazy pace which is so perfect for this story, the characters, and the conversations! Oh I love the conversations the most! You are a genius! Please write more!!! Its just awesome! Thank you!