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They're both in it deep. They need to quit denying it.
But that does make it more intreasting, cannot wait for another chapter! <3333333
PLZ Don't take forver for an update, thats just mean. I'm having withdrawl symthons. D;

*Fists shaking up towards the sky* WHY? WWHHHYYYY?! *whispers* why?
Some great things about this chapter is that Both of them know they are in deep, Kakashi's self-gratifying scene proves it. *insert Miniacle laughter here* Their metaphoric DRUG ADDICTION towards each other was a great build up! I cant tell you how much I want to thank you for that wonderful Makeout scene! It was beautiful *whips away tears* ENCORE!!!

This tension and buildup between them is priceless, I just hope they don't get hurt in the process [excluding Tsunade's reaction towards their -real- relationship status.]

You've done a terrific job at writing this! Your a Great author and you deserve a clap on the back, but since I cant do it, Give yourself a clap on the back for me. You better do it, I swear, cause if you dont... *glare* I've got the forces of... rose thorns on my side... okay that wasnt much of a threat, but its better than taking my bow and arrows out of their case or that Katana I am fondly looking at at the moment. *checky grin* [Notice: If author ends up mysteriously murdered by either of those weapons I hear by annouce "It Wasnt Me!"]

Good luck

Another incredible chapter! I'm so glad that finally got somewhere sexually and that Sakura has realized her feelings. Now I can't wait to see what Genma has in store for them! Great job!!

yes yes YES!!
just when i was about to lose hope, you pulled through man!
i've gotta say, i had some high expectations for this one..and you met them AND THEN SOME!
tres smexy and i cant wait for the next chapter!

WHAT HAPPENED?!
sory, but when this got updated a while back, i thought more would follow..
i really hope you havent decided to discontinue this fic
It is by far one of my top favourite fics on AFF
all im asking is for some closure! DX

good idea!! for chapter 19, sakura who believes that kakashi's wallet was stolen pays for their next date after begging tsunade for a little money, so during their whole date kakashi's being a little distant cause he feels slighty betrayed at the thought that sakura is only after his books, so but sakura during the date tells him she had a strange dream about him cause at first sasuke was there at first but then she tells him that he replaced him and the kakashi is always on her mind while looking at him with gliming eyes cause she felt bad for him he got robbed, and thus awkwardness surrounds them for the rest of the night. And so in chap 20 you and can add some minor smut when sakura accidenly cast a genjutsu on herself while practicing in her room she didn't notice a small mirror was left open, and her hormones get a little out of control, and later on she invites kakashi over again to make up for the last time she thought she ruined dinner, she finds out that kakashi knows shes after his books and because shes still in the genjutsu, she starts loosening her shirt and drops her skirt and being seductive (note: the genjutsu loosened her mind so during her day off before she invited kakashi over she was reading ino's books and got some ideas) and sakura lays down on the couch all sprawled out saying, "ok kakashi cum interrorgate me!!" kakashi ponders for a few moments wondering whats going on and he realizes it has to be a genjutsu, he thinks the room is a genjutsu so he opens his sharingan but then fails he realizes that its on sakura so he tries to dispell it it turns out he can't cause sakura's eyes are covered a cloth (she blinds herself thinking kakashi didn't want her see his face) so akwardly kakashi reaching for the cloth falls on top of her and starts strugging to get it off at the same time sakura is moaning his name and then ino who was just outside the door hears this and peaks inside and see kakashi on top of her and the cloths on the floor then leaves immidately heading to hinatas place to bunk thinking they're having sex, eventually kakashi get the blindfold off and dispells the genjutsu and sakura falls asleep kakashi takes her to her room and tucks her in he see their team 7 pictures and hears sakura say his name in her sleep and kakashi whos worn out from the whole event slumps on the couch with a full erection and ends up falling asleep on the couch, end of chapter.
so what u think good idea yeah all yours to use if you don't have anything else

I love this story!!! Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait for your next chapter!

Hmz, Thanks for uploading again, keep writing!

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And the plot thickens!!!

You are my master. *bows and worships* You surprised me hugely with this one. One, the twist about it NOT being Lee blew my mind. Then finding out who WAS blew it even further . . . and I need to stop using that phrase . . .

GO GENMA!!!

I absolutely LOVED every moment of this chapter, and I love how Kakashi thinks she used an explosive. That look on his face in Shippuuden episodes 3-4 was freaking priceless, and that part made me think of it. I loved that no matter how devastated Kakashi was, he still managed to keep his cool and play Sakura into thinking he'd been mugged. And I hope Sakura and Pakkun don't come out of this too badly. Manipulative bastard . . .

Oh, darling nimblnymph, you amaze and surprise me with every turn. I can't wait to see what happens next!

~Dina

I never saw that one coming! Woah! Awsome as always! Keep up the good work and please do more!