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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, this was great. Not usually a Naru/Saku, but this was actually a good read. Liked the second chapter better than the first though. I wish you were on fanfic.net so that I could save this as a favorite.
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You did say you’re gonna write another chapter for this story but I didn’t expect for you to post it so soon. That was quick! But the best thing is that even if you were quick you kept the same awesome writing style. I’m glad you’re not one of those writers that just update because they were asked to, that thing affecting most of the time their story quality. It’s obvious you enjoy writing. Thump up for you!
Happy to see you added a new chapter to this story! The first chapter was the first thing that I read from you and got me addicted to adult fanfics (don’t tell mom :D). Of course, yours are the most addictive ones. :)
In the end of chapter one I was still wondering if that „physical” really happened or it was Naruto’s lil dirty mind playing tricks on him. (can’t blame poor boy, he’s Ero-Sennin’s student after all ).This chapter gave me a clear answer to that question I guess. Oh, or it was the Kyuubi giving that answer? :D
In the first chapter, seeing Sakura as the bossy, demanding one, making Naruto plead for more was pretty cool and something new for me. In the second one you made „Naruto” the bossy one, Kyuubi was in charge most of the time and you added an orgy too....<33333
I liked the way the chapter started...The atmosphere there was really cozy. Just Sakura alone in her room, after working hard all day long, deserving a good rest. I was expecting for Naruto to show up at a point but I swear I wasn’t expecting for Kyuubi to to tell Naruto about the true behind that „physical” and for sure I wasn’t expecting for him to take over Naruto’s body at a time like that. (Hehe, Kyuubi’s smirk does make me think of a lil pervert demon). That was truly unexpected.
The way Sakura acted in the beginning, when she understood Kyuubi took over Naruto’s body really spiced up things (yay, and finally someone was able to stop her punch XD). Love the way you described the feeling that was trying her, her fear, the fact that the only thing she could do was to listen, like a puppy, to her master’s demands.
THANKS for making one of my dreams come true! I always wanted to see (told you, you always use the perfect amount of details to make the story easy to imagine, even for the less creative minds) a sex scene involving Naruto and his clones (damn, him and Sakura are really lucky bastards :D) And you even included here all types of sex. That was really hot! (hope no one from the board will read this -_-).
Thumb up again for you for adding a new „purpose” for the red chakra! Sakura’s reactions said all about the feeling of having that inside of your body. I guess that was some sort of payback for what she did to Naruto in the first chapter (molding chakra around Naruto’s cock, teasing him like hell and making him beg for her to stop was evil ;D ).
The chapter ended exactly in the same atmosphere it began, with the same silence and calm around the areas. Naruto, finally regaining control and kissing her was really sweet. If the first chapter made me wonder if things actually happened, this one makes me wonder if Naruto agreed with Kyuubi to let him in charge of things. :) Love open endings!!!
Congrats for the story! It made me think of funny things again (lucky me, cousin wasn’t around this time =P). Can’t wait for you to post the first chapter of the incest story! Bye-Bye! <333
Happy to see you added a new chapter to this story! The first chapter was the first thing that I read from you and got me addicted to adult fanfics (don’t tell mom :D). Of course, yours are the most addictive ones. :)
In the end of chapter one I was still wondering if that „physical” really happened or it was Naruto’s lil dirty mind playing tricks on him. (can’t blame poor boy, he’s Ero-Sennin’s student after all ).This chapter gave me a clear answer to that question I guess. Oh, or it was the Kyuubi giving that answer? :D
In the first chapter, seeing Sakura as the bossy, demanding one, making Naruto plead for more was pretty cool and something new for me. In the second one you made „Naruto” the bossy one, Kyuubi was in charge most of the time and you added an orgy too....<33333
I liked the way the chapter started...The atmosphere there was really cozy. Just Sakura alone in her room, after working hard all day long, deserving a good rest. I was expecting for Naruto to show up at a point but I swear I wasn’t expecting for Kyuubi to to tell Naruto about the true behind that „physical” and for sure I wasn’t expecting for him to take over Naruto’s body at a time like that. (Hehe, Kyuubi’s smirk does make me think of a lil pervert demon). That was truly unexpected.
The way Sakura acted in the beginning, when she understood Kyuubi took over Naruto’s body really spiced up things (yay, and finally someone was able to stop her punch XD). Love the way you described the feeling that was trying her, her fear, the fact that the only thing she could do was to listen, like a puppy, to her master’s demands.
THANKS for making one of my dreams come true! I always wanted to see (told you, you always use the perfect amount of details to make the story easy to imagine, even for the less creative minds) a sex scene involving Naruto and his clones (damn, him and Sakura are really lucky bastards :D) And you even included here all types of sex. That was really hot! (hope no one from the board will read this -_-).
Thumb up again for you for adding a new „purpose” for the red chakra! Sakura’s reactions said all about the feeling of having that inside of your body. I guess that was some sort of payback for what she did to Naruto in the first chapter (molding chakra around Naruto’s cock, teasing him like hell and making him beg for her to stop was evil ;D ).
The chapter ended exactly in the same atmosphere it began, with the same silence and calm around the areas. Naruto, finally regaining control and kissing her was really sweet. If the first chapter made me wonder if things actually happened, this one makes me wonder if Naruto agreed with Kyuubi to let him in charge of things. :) Love open endings!!!
Congrats for the story! It made me think of funny things again (lucky me, cousin wasn’t around this time =P). Can’t wait for you to post the first chapter of the incest story! Bye-Bye! <333
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, that nearly KILLED me. Oh dear god.
Epic. Erotic. WIN.
Epic. Erotic. WIN.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good.
Very descriptive and I like the reversal of fortune. It makes for a nice setup for this chapter.
Very descriptive and I like the reversal of fortune. It makes for a nice setup for this chapter.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck! O_O
How did I never come across the original story before? That was goddamn unbelieveably hotttt!!! Hmmm... damn.
The second chapter was pretty hot too. Was Naruto back to himself by the end there? Personally, it only proves to me how retarded she is that she didn't just outright claim Naruto openlly so she could have that type of action any time she wanted. :P I know I would have~!
Keep up the great work! I'm gonna have to check for some other stories by you now.
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How did I never come across the original story before? That was goddamn unbelieveably hotttt!!! Hmmm... damn.
The second chapter was pretty hot too. Was Naruto back to himself by the end there? Personally, it only proves to me how retarded she is that she didn't just outright claim Naruto openlly so she could have that type of action any time she wanted. :P I know I would have~!
Keep up the great work! I'm gonna have to check for some other stories by you now.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Keep up the great work, I love turnabout...it's so much fun, lol
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol that was awesome. More NaruSaku plllleeeeeease!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great one shot, hot, sweet, and most definitely to the point :) You're a very good lemon writer, you should do more
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Thats all I have to say.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pure awesomeness. I don't know why you don't make more of these, but you are an Olympian god of Naru/Saku. XD