rate_review Reviews

OK, i just want to state right now that i suck at giving reviews as i am often very vague.

I enjoyed this story. It stayed true to both the characters as well as highly intuitive. It is rare for me to actually read a story like this one but this one made me curious to see what others are in the genre.

Check it out.

Now that was, for want of a better word, hot. And one perhaps better enjoyed whilst your mother isn't in the room. In fact, I might just have to give it a re-read a little later ;)

I'll be honest with you and say I've never liked this pairing, and I still don't. But by god did you make it bearable. You really are such an amazing writer, and you don't cheapen the story by over excessive use of 'dirty' words. When you use them, they work and just blend into the story, you don't use them as a desperate attempt to make the story erotic. Believe me, I've read some awful stories that do just that.

I love how and where the story took place, you managed to make something that is never going to appear in the manga appear canon, and if you can do that in my eyes you can do no wrong.

Keep me posted every time you write something new, you know I love them. I kept hearing about this story, but no-one seemed to see fit to tell me where to find it, I'm glad you took pity!

Love Kirsty

xoxox

Amazing, please more of this great work.

(Standing Ovation)
Wow that was hot!
Sakura is totally sadistic at times. I forget sometimes.
All in all, I loved it!!!!!!!

First of

Wow

It was just

Wow

I mean usually I read Sasunaru stories and avoid SasuSaku *shudders* I hate that couple and NaruSaku

But fcking hell Gopher I had no idea you could write something so HOT!!! seriously my fingers were shaking while I was reading it.

When Naruto and Sakura hook up I hope it'll be EXACTLY like your fanfic.

BTW we have the same fanfic ID =P
Except I'm Yagamiraitoo =P

As if I didn't tell you enough times before, TEME!!!!! =P

I love your writing. This is probably the best piece you've done so far. It has plenty of detail, but it doesn't bog it down. Very, very hot action, which is something sadly lacking in most fanfics today, and the fact that oyu took so long really shows in that it is a higher quality work than most you see on here.

Keep it up. . . . .Dobe =P.


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~L~

Twas a good read given the intended purpose. I disagree with the above user who considered the light BDSM as out of place or OOC. I understand these characters well enough to see Sakura as one who would do that. Of course, it would have to be with Naruto. As the author has pointed out before on the Naruto board IMDB forum, Sakura's pet name for Naruto is rather abusive (idiot Naruto I believe, and it was brought up in chapter 311 or 312, no?). Since she likes referring to one of her closest friends (if not, her closest) in abusive manner, one could suggest that she likes being able to physically treat him in abusive manner (as we see in the MANY MANY times in the manga). When also noting that Naruto doesn't mind her beating the snot out of him (in fact, the only time he is averse to it is when he finds out she received super strength, I think it's pretty clear that this is exactly how a sex romp between Naruto and Sakura would go. Thus, kudos to the author as I don't run across too many people who actually have a solid understanding of these characters.

Anywho, I think this story would be more fitting if it were in a full fic (rather than a one shot). i had a few nitpicks, but they are extremely minor (brownnosy even), so I won't bring them up. I give it 9.2/10. Look forward to future fics.

Yours truly
Kenshin.

Twas awesome. It was really great. I felt bad though that I couldn't have left a review for when finishing the last paragraph, I was summoned by a few people and we had to go to a location. But enough about that.

The story was great. I grew very fond as I read it over time and found myself quite enjoying all aspects of which you have written about. If by chance if you ever write another story, I will gladly be one of the first people to read your story under any given circumstances for I think this story was majestic in what you've shown me through your dialogue, and all.

wow that was sooo yummy!!!!!!!!!!~

Wow! *fans self* that was fucking hot!!!