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for Temptations

by MissMayumi

person gaara89
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update this asap!!! very original concept for an itanaru story! i can't wait to see more!
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be a sequel to this? :3:3:3


I like where this is going!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...this is too hot for words. I mean, really, it is! Itachi almost sounded like a little kid saying otousan, but it made me laugh :P

oh, right, thanks for writing. can't wait to see another!
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this. ^_^
I have a thing for step-dad fics, plus they're fun to write.
So I'm sure I'll enjoy reading one for a change. ♥++
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would kill for more!!! PLEASE!
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! update soon please!!!^-^
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! update soon please!!!^-^
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'd real like to read more of this. Great job.
=)
person blueh
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far. Yay for ItaNaru!
person Rosebud
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I lied. I went ahead and read it now. But wow... being on this site feels nostalgic. Haha, what am I talking about? I need to get my ass in gear and update. YOU need to do the same thing too; cause I want more ItaNaru goodness. I loved this chapter dear, but is that really surprising? I love everything that you write! Keep it up, I want to see chapter 2 soon. And I’ll talk to you tonight.