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February 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Pity you never finiahed this it is very interesting.
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April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to finish this story? Or did something happen to you? I know its been years and years, but I truly hope you finish someday. I hate au stories but I loved this one. It has been interesting and amazing so far.
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the smut, the smut! Needless to say how hot it was! Iruka really has depth and layers, and it's good that Kakashi has some help in deciphering them. Your Tsunade is great; she's worried about both the village in general and Iruka in particular.
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The beginning of the chapter 8 was a bit confusing... It might be missing some indicators of a flashback? I'm glad Kakashi's cold feet didn't get the better of him and he's at least trying. Awful lot of abuse going on in Konoha. I hope Rei will success in leaving Takara, but I suspect it won't be that easy. I wonder what will happen next, especially now that Mizuki has committed a murder. This story holds so much potential, I hope you have your inspiration soon!
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely phenomenal. I've only just recently got into the Naruto fandom but Kakashi/Iruka has quickly become a favourite pairing and I think your story (in the time it's taken me to read the whole thing in one sitting) has become my favourite story. You have a fantastic writing style and I love the plot you've created. Please say you're not going to leave it there and that you're going to finish it?!
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update,please?
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, I love how well you've drawn the characters and your attention to detail. The narrative flows along so nicely, and is undoubtedly the reason I've gone to bed so late these last two nights! ;) I very much hope you continue this story soon, I'll be keeping a close eye for further chapters.
Thanks!
Thanks!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is the best kakairu i've read all year keep it up
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot sweet and freaky all in one! Now thats a good lemon pie lol!!! It has b sooooo looooonngg just sitting here waiting for an update, so this made me extra happy ^^ ooo make up sex is always the best! I love how u had Iruka do the chick comparrision and then kakashi had to check 4 boob o.o lol This is such a great story. I hope to c more updates again soon!!!!
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it is a great story there arent many that invole iruka and miz.
it is a great story there arent many that invole iruka and miz.