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for Societal Gap

by naracest

person Anon
schedule October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish the story! I so badly want to see a happy ending for everyone!
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wowza please tell me how many soap operas you watch to come up with this lol and seriously i think itachi and naruto and sasuke should alll have play time lol fucking uchihas!!!! muwahahaha and i must say i was impressed with irukas little comment and i even for a whole second thought something that i never ever pictured and that was well itachi and said iruka but phuleas dear back pack do not pair itachi with kisami and itachi cant have rei because already kikashis and i cant spell his name right oh oh and and please please dont put kikashis honor system before saving or stoping something horrible from happening to naruto......sigh well thanks for an amazing chappy hehehehe
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good trouble!!
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
I wonder what Itachi has in mind... He doesn't actually want Sasuke does he???
I mean seriously... Yeah.
Anyway, It would be very enjoyable if you updated soon, and I'm sure you understand.
XD Well, good luck with the next chapter, and I can't wait to see it.

XD LANE
person qwerty
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I love Rei and her fiery temper. Itachi is just creepy as hell. *smirk* Although being "an advanced case" of what Sasuke was during the war has stuck in my head. Could there be redemption for Itachi later on in the story?
Awesome chapter. Update!!!
person nyge98
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story. I think adding Itachi was a great twist. I can't wait till the next chapter.
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"“Oh yeah. The shop keeper gave me a discount on account of my intimidatin’ nature.”" That is so Jane from firefly!!! LOL! I love that show.
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think you have a very good story, but at first i have to be honest the summary out me off. but since i am trying to work out some writer's block i read it and found it to be funny and a really cute and nice story. i like that it seems sasuke has a rival for narutos affections in itachi, i can't wait to see how that turns out. can't wait til the next chapter.
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOOD story. Really good. Poor Suke...
I don't like it when Itachi is like that in stories. I prefer it when he's nice.
But you're story's awesome, so I think I'll just deal.
XD
Update soon?
person charmpit
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love and enjoy the way you write! It's...festive. It takes the sting out of the angst too. I'm not sure if that was your intention. Just an observation.

Oh, and I see the hand of michelerene at work in this fic. Another observation.

How many more chapters before Naruto and Sasuke finally consummate their burgeoning...frustration? The tension is REMARKABLY ridiculous!