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Someone has to revise plural... Fishes is it? XD
I like Naruto. And I like shikamaru.
Poor Naruto. Is he going to go Berzerk when he sees Neji? That would be interesting...
Maybe he'll just wait for Sasuke to get back to do that. It would be more... Usefull.
You know you're being mean right?
When you put jokes and humour in the middle of a stressful part? Because if you don't know, I'm telling you now.
Well, can't wait for tuesday! Well... Probably wednesday the way I'm going but still...
XD LANE

so beautiful...

Thanks for the update, it has me on the edge of my seat as usual. Ra that's such a tacky line 'edge of my seat'. * is embarrassed for even writing the piece of rubbish* Anyways, please update once more when you find the time to do so.

lol

Naruto and Neji is going to be a hell of a meeting. :P
heheh Keep up teh good work!

There's that line again 'It's not my/your fault'. D:<

I felt a bit heartbroken at Naruto's past as a child.
It must be hard to go through your whole life wondering who were your real parents.
And for children to be that cruel to you.
I don't think I could make it through life like that. :[

I laughed a bit at the thought of Shikamaru sleeping on the job,.. again xD

Oooh!
I see Neji is coming back into the picture!
Drama is sure to come~

Loved the chapter! :D

Gah! So we finally get to see Naruto's reaction to Sasuke's flight. I kept urging in my head while reading "call Shikamaru" "call Shika" "he's in the city, call Shikamaru, you have his number!" lol

I hope Naruto is able to find and kick down Orochimaru's door and rescue Sasuke from himself valiantly.
Keep up the good work.

Oooo. This is bad. Real bad. Poor Naruto.....
Really....
Took him a long time to call Shikamaru... I wonder what he's going to do...
This chapter was intense.
Arrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhh!
Mhhhh.... I think that's all I have to say. No, I have a lot to say, but I think that's all that I can say.
Well... Hope next chapter is Shika's. And I suppose you're right. Sasuke deserves a break... And so does Naruto. So Shika should be next. Or Gaara. I wouldn't mind a chappie with Gaara and Lee...
XD LANE

Man... You dont know just how stupid I looked while reading this chapter. I wanted to cry right along with Naru-chan, even though I semi-know whats going on. ^^; But great story as always, and I cant wait for the next one.
It seems like Im wishing my life away for your next update... Hmm... Oh well!

Oh man.
If I were Naruto, I would have broken down quite a while ago.

How scarring it must be, to go through your first 'intimate contact' and to have your partner gone the very next day.
To top it all off, you knew something was wrong during your 'intimate contact'.
And not to mention, that you have an undying love for that person.

I don't blame Naruto for not listening to his logical side.
Who can honestly say that they could think clearly if they were in his shoes?

I personally think that the worst thing you could say to a person is 'It's not your fault'.
When someone tells me that, I always end up feeling more guilty than before.

Ugh.
My day was really crappy.
At least this is one good thing that happened today. :]

XD These were really good chapters.
I'm sorry I didn't read them before...
The one with Itachi was kind of strange... And I loved the one with Shikamaru... I hope you have more with him! XD
Poor Naruto... I mean, he went through all of this, and then Sasuke dissapears on him... I can't wait to see his reaction when he realises that Sasuke's gone. And Kakashi's reaction... And Iruka's.
Oh, I also liked that chapter... The one with Kakashi and Iruka... They are really good together aren't they? XD I'm surprised they chose to go on a cruise for the week end. I would have imagined them more like back in the country or something like that...
Anyway... I hope you get back to Sasuke in the next chapters... I want to see if his mind has gone back to normal yet... Maybe Shika will learn that Sasuke is with the sound, and then there'll be this huge thing, and it will be like, WOW!
Maybe not. I guess I'll find out soon enough... Poor Shike though... He has to take care of everything and think about everything...
Well, until the next chapter, and I'm sorry again for not reviewing for like... 4 chapters... =(
XD LAne