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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

person Nanin
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to remember this chapter for the rest of my life. xD

I thought I was going to die from laughter!
I laughed for a good 15 minutes, but oh man, I could not stop!

And what's worse is that I need to apply lube to my recent project in school.
Now I'm not going to stop laughing when I see the bottle. xD

Oh well, at least I get a good laugh. n_n

Today was a very emotional day for me, so thank you for cheering up my mood with this chapter.
It helped me tremendously.

You know you have my love!
person Halskr
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the funniesty chapter of the whole this so far. Gaara really is evil. Thanks for the update on this.
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol.


That was great! ^^
person MewMew
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating once more. Please do so again at your leisure.
person Nanin
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, I started tearing up at this chapter.
The thought that Itachi knew that Sasuke was angry toward him on this particular day, and that he knew that he wasn't going to see him in quite a while, made me sad.

Even though Sasuke always wanted to cut through that bond toward his brother, the bond remains intact.

This chapter made me think quite a bit.
Because when I was younger (even today) my older sister (who was very close to me) could always tell when I had a bad day or when I would pick a fight with her. Even without seeing me that day.
It's an instinct among siblings, I guess.

For some reason, this brightened my day dramatically.
Probably because this chapter made me shed tears that were due quite a while ago.
So I thanks you for that too. :D

You know you have my love!

I'm anxious to see Naruto's reaction.
So I'll wait patiently for the next chapter or so D;
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The chapter regarding Shikamaru was touching. He's always been more of a supporting outside character before this, but this one really fleshed him out. My heart clenched when he had his brain slip and headed towards Sasuke's apartment like always only to really realize for the first time that he was no longer there. Sad, but beautifully written chapter.

Keep up the great work.
person Nanin
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww.
Another really sweet chapter!
I was wondering when I got to see Shikamaru's past with Sasuke.

I feel sorry for him, because he had some feelings toward Sasuke, but I even I could see that it would have ended badly.
But still, aww. ;~;

Neji is jealous I see.
Well too bad for him. D:<

Unfortuantely, I see that even from a young age Sasuke has tried to erase his probelms through addictions.
*sigh*

I love reading these chapters in the morning!
Makes my morning so much brighter!

Love~






person MewMew2
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the introspective look into Shikamaru's thought process. Please update again when you have the time.
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi and Iruka finally decide to focus on themselves for a few hours and not worry about the kids and look what happens~!! After this is all over and everybody finally gets Sasuke home, both Naruto and Sasuke will never be a loud out of their rooms again!!! o_o


Keep up the good work!
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi and Iruka finally decide to focus on themselves for a few hours and not worry about the kids and look what happens~!! After this is all over and everybody finally gets Sasuke home, both Naruto and Sasuke will never be a loud out of their rooms again!!! o_o


Keep up the good work!