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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

person Telpei
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, Sasuke! This is so sad! :( Naruto! Also sad! Geez. WTF is wrong with Sasuke??? Thinking about Itachi at a time like that! That kid seriously needs to lighten up and learn to go with the flow. He's definitely over-thinking the whole situation. I hate to say it, but Iruka was probably right lol. Maybe they are too young. But, at the same time, if Sasuke had been honest with Naruto and told him he wanted to wait, they wouldn't have had this problem! Yikes. It makes me really sad that Sasuke didn't enjoy it :( And now he's gone and run off to the city and Naruto doesn't know where he is :( Poor naru-chan must be so sad and confused. I hope he calls Shikamaru, I think he'd be able to get through Sasuke's head and bring him back. *sigh* This was depressing!! :( I hope that things get happier soon. These two certianly deserve it! *glares at you* There is a happy ending, right? RIGHT? *Uchiha glare of doom*
person Nanin
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter clears a heck load of things (Well for right now) about the earlier chapters.
I was laughing at the thought "No sex? Riiiight. Sure."
This whole chapter made me giggle/laugh.
It was also extremely sweet (in my perverted point of view).

I know what's coming next, we all do! *wink wink*
Well.. I hope. xD

I'm going to try to be patient for the next chapter, but I make no promises!

I'm really curious to see what's next!
person Halskr
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. You really conveyed that sense of awkwardness and insecurity. At this point in the story they are so connected, and yet their age really comes through here. It is a very nice touch. However, I am still so confused about the last two previous chapters, but I have an idea what it is. Thanks for the update on this.
person masako
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH!!! i'm sooooo confused. there this giant hole from 45 to 46. whats going on? correct me if i'm wrong but 45 happened after the visit to the clinic? that wasn't some flash into the past dealy and i missed the curtain. so what did i miss?

And a cruise...i'm with Sasuke and amazed at Kakashi's powers of persuassion.

brain hurts...too much studying...need food...bed...

Well as always, Hot Stuff. can't wait for more.
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay... So now that, that chapter was put out I think I know what happened... I think. But Im still kinda cunfused with chapter 44 and 45... Well lets hurry and wait for chappie 47 and maybe some more 'light of understanding' will come. ^^
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god. No explanations??? You're just letting us stew?? Give us a glimpse of the future and now we can't even look forward to them finally getting completely physical without a sense of dread?? O_O

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I am dreading the next update, because I know something will go horribly horribly wrong. :(


schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okaay.... To say the least: I AM VERY CONFUSED.
I didn't understand anything about those last three chapters, you were completely incomprehensible, and you're going to have to make a sumary for me that puts everything into place, otherwise, I'll burst into tears of frustration.
I'm not going to say anything for the last chapters, because I didn't understand anything, as I already said (are you purposefully trying to confuse us to death?)
Going back, I loooooved the chapter with Itachi. That was an awesome chapter. I like how you put Shika into it aswell. That was awesome. But from there on, it appears you went cookoo, or I read wrong, but I don't get it.
Well, this time, I can't wait for your answer, and after I've read that, the next chapter...
XD LANE
person Nanin
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright.
I had to read these chapters twice to grasp what is it talking about.

What I came up with was:
Sasuke and Naruto went all the way, and then Sasuke ran away to Orochirmaru.
Got hyped up, and felt bad about that and leaving Naruto.
Am I close, or completely wrong?

I'm terribly confused.
person silverfox
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O I....I'm lost!!! The last two chapters?????? SASUKE WENT BACK TO OROCHIMARU!!!!???? What the heck??!!! O.O My...*criys uncontrollably* My poor NARUTO!!!! I think this is what dying feels like o.o
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Ok. I've had to read and re-read the last chapter a few times after reading this chapter twice.

WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON??!!! ((O_O)) HOLY FUCK!

I mean seriously. I feel like I missed out on a huge gap of information somewhere. The last chapter didn't really make any sense, but I figured it was either a dream or the inside of Itachi's head or something - and whatever the something was, it would be explained in the next chapter so I wasn't too worried about it. Now this??? OH MY GOD>>> did you forget to update a chapter somewhere? What happened??? Why is Sasuke back with Orochimaru?? What did he have sex with him? Why did he run away from everything and join up with the creepy pervert and jump head first -far more than he ever has before- into a life of drugs?? What's going on??? I'm so incredibly upset right now. Obviously Sasuke fucked up everything beyond all reason to be in the situation he is in now. But what happened to get here??? I'm missing some very important information and am in dire need of a exposition or something! ç_ç

Last thing I understood was that Sasuke was beyond grateful and finally accepting the life he has now in the suburbs with Naruto, Kakashi, and Iruka. Somewhere something has gone horribly wrong.

I need explanations.

I need something!!

:(