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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Mash-san =)
I need to calm down... i'm really involved with AS and i have a big problem over here. The last 2 chaps (44 and 45) were read twice each, for proper assimilation of all new and confusing informations... but need a clarification. Really need. I'll never ever critisize you work because it's totally awesome and i'm toooo far away to have guts to point anything wrong, but i have a trully horror related to "no going back" bad occurances. I'm so involved with AS that for me to continue to read i need to know if Sasuke has lost his virginity to Orochimaru. I'm really sorry if i'm not being professional enough, don't be insulted please, but i'll not be able to read anymore if that was true.
I know i'm crazy, but just for the hint about Orochimaru being the "cherry popper" you gave in the chap 45, my eyes burned and i had to stop reading for a wile^^ I'm feeling like Naruto huh? =D
Please, help me? =(
I need to calm down... i'm really involved with AS and i have a big problem over here. The last 2 chaps (44 and 45) were read twice each, for proper assimilation of all new and confusing informations... but need a clarification. Really need. I'll never ever critisize you work because it's totally awesome and i'm toooo far away to have guts to point anything wrong, but i have a trully horror related to "no going back" bad occurances. I'm so involved with AS that for me to continue to read i need to know if Sasuke has lost his virginity to Orochimaru. I'm really sorry if i'm not being professional enough, don't be insulted please, but i'll not be able to read anymore if that was true.
I know i'm crazy, but just for the hint about Orochimaru being the "cherry popper" you gave in the chap 45, my eyes burned and i had to stop reading for a wile^^ I'm feeling like Naruto huh? =D
Please, help me? =(
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I read the last 2 chapters and I can honestly say that I'm lost with the last one. One moment they are on the bus and the next after what I assume is Itachi thinking, Sasu is waking up from having sex w/someone else other than Naru. I guess it won't make sense until the next chapter.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I just got lost as hell... Hopefully I'll get straighten out in the next chapter though...
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! it has been awhile since i reviewed this story, or read it for that matter. 42 and 43 were extremely emotional. Some of the thoughts of Sasuke were going to make me cry. Now 44...I'M CONFUSED!!! i kind of have an idea but i want to know who that is...again the whole whining thing. Anyways, as always, awesome socks!!!! happy writing!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeesh...that sooooooooooo did not make me feel any better. i kind of feel like hitting someone i'm so frustrated. if naruto doesn't hit sasuke then i'm going to...the one in my head anyways. maybe Gaara will? oh man, now i have too many questions in my head to go to sleep...thank you very much. Well YAY updates...boo butt heads and can't wait for more. :)
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. The last two chapters have thrown me (44 and 45). It goes from leaving the mental institution after Sasuke getting his pills from Shikamaru to Sasuke waking up in Orochimaru's apartment after having sex with someone. I thought chapter 44 was a chapter about Itachi being crazy and having a split personality. So yeah definately got lost here somehow. So hopefully the next chapter will clear some things up a bit. Thanks for the update on this.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
. . . . uhh... i'm really REALLY confused. what just happened? why did sasuke go back to the city? to orochimaru, no less? why is naruto sad? why doesn't he want to go back?! *starts crying* i- its?! WHAT HAPPENED?! th-they had sex, right? and... sasuke didn't like it...? so... he left in the middle of the night...? *sniffles* please update and explain as soon as you can! i don't like being confused!!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now Im going to wait in anticipation. From the last two chapters, it sounds like Sasuke slept with Oochimaru.... but sentences in the last one make it sound like Naruto or tried to.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, chapter 43 ended with such a tender moment. ^^
Keep up the great work. ^^
Keep up the great work. ^^
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was so cute! Naru-chan is adorable. I love how he thought Shikamaru was Neji. ^_^'' And once they got talking a bit, their interactions were cute too. I like how they ganged up on Sasuke haha. "I could have been Neji." Priceless. Poor Sasuke.
I like how you had Sasuke tell Naruto about his past. It was concise and to the point, without any fumbling around in the bushes. I really think that it was representative of Sasuke's character. And I really liked Naruto's reaction, too. They're so cute together! I love it.
And poor Itachi is so sad!!! *huggles Itachi* Man, that sucks. Personality disorders are the worst. No cure, hard to diagnose, lifelong disorders, that are manageable at best. I just hope he's in a high security establishment so that he doesn't escape and try to kill anyone else. Scary. I would like to read more about him in this story though! :( I wish some things could be resolved between him and Sasuke. Do you think you will write more about him in the chapters to come??
This was a great chapter, I really enjoyed it! Some of my questions were finally answered and my anxiety has gone down somewhat lol. I swear you're trying to give me high blood pressure or something! :P
Please update soon!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D *glomp attack*
I like how you had Sasuke tell Naruto about his past. It was concise and to the point, without any fumbling around in the bushes. I really think that it was representative of Sasuke's character. And I really liked Naruto's reaction, too. They're so cute together! I love it.
And poor Itachi is so sad!!! *huggles Itachi* Man, that sucks. Personality disorders are the worst. No cure, hard to diagnose, lifelong disorders, that are manageable at best. I just hope he's in a high security establishment so that he doesn't escape and try to kill anyone else. Scary. I would like to read more about him in this story though! :( I wish some things could be resolved between him and Sasuke. Do you think you will write more about him in the chapters to come??
This was a great chapter, I really enjoyed it! Some of my questions were finally answered and my anxiety has gone down somewhat lol. I swear you're trying to give me high blood pressure or something! :P
Please update soon!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D *glomp attack*