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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I think that you have really keep everyone in character, and you have made it is much fun to read this. I am really happy that you have Lee/Gaara in you story because that is one of my favourite pairings. I hope that you will update again soon because that would be awesome!!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord I wanted to cry so badly.
The way Sasuke views his brother, and what had happened...just crushed me.
I shed a tear but not more than that.
But the ending was so sweet, and heart warming, it lighten my mood up dramatically.
It's official.
You are my number one favorite writer here.
No contest.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. Keep up the good work when you can.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooOOOOHH!! I can't wait!! what's gonna happen next? What will Naruto think? How will Naruto react? What is Kakashi up too at this moment?
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so sure Naruto was going to beat the crap out of the cashier.
Would have been a good butt-wooping too, but, eh, at least Sasuke got some sense into him.
The whole brother ordeal is really interesting to me.
More, ppppplease?
Would have been a good butt-wooping too, but, eh, at least Sasuke got some sense into him.
The whole brother ordeal is really interesting to me.
More, ppppplease?
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah o.O My last review did get cut off! :( Crap. Well, let me try to remember what I wrote about..
Jealous Naruto = cute! Haha he's too adorable. I wish he could see inside Sasuke's head just for a minute so that he would know what was really going on inside of his Bastard's mind, but I guess it's more fun when he doesn't know. Sasuke shouldn't be so mean! I wish he would just tell Naruto what he's feeling. *sigh* But that's just not Sasuke's way. Damn him for being so mysterious all the time ;)
And, gotta love Kisame! Hahaha too cute. I just want to hug the guy. Honestly, self-inflicted wounds because he thinks he's a shark! *cracks up laughing* I know, I'm an evil person for finding that so amusing. *pats Kisame* Poor guy just needs a hug.
I can't wait to see how you write Itachi! I luves Itachi. <3
How is Naruto going to react when he learns more about Sasuke's past??? This story does follow the Naruto-plotline in that Itachi was the one who murdered Sasuke's family, right? How does Sasuke feel about that?? Why did Itachi do it? What mental disorder does he have that's keeping him in the hospital? Ahhh there are so many questions! Haha, I'm hungry for more so please update soon!
Did I mention that I love Itachi?? ^_~ I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
(Hopefully the review works this time... sorry about earlier, guess my computer had a seizure or something >_< )
Jealous Naruto = cute! Haha he's too adorable. I wish he could see inside Sasuke's head just for a minute so that he would know what was really going on inside of his Bastard's mind, but I guess it's more fun when he doesn't know. Sasuke shouldn't be so mean! I wish he would just tell Naruto what he's feeling. *sigh* But that's just not Sasuke's way. Damn him for being so mysterious all the time ;)
And, gotta love Kisame! Hahaha too cute. I just want to hug the guy. Honestly, self-inflicted wounds because he thinks he's a shark! *cracks up laughing* I know, I'm an evil person for finding that so amusing. *pats Kisame* Poor guy just needs a hug.
I can't wait to see how you write Itachi! I luves Itachi. <3
How is Naruto going to react when he learns more about Sasuke's past??? This story does follow the Naruto-plotline in that Itachi was the one who murdered Sasuke's family, right? How does Sasuke feel about that?? Why did Itachi do it? What mental disorder does he have that's keeping him in the hospital? Ahhh there are so many questions! Haha, I'm hungry for more so please update soon!
Did I mention that I love Itachi?? ^_~ I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
(Hopefully the review works this time... sorry about earlier, guess my computer had a seizure or something >_< )
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, it got cut off again! Well this is annoying :(
So, in the middle of proclaiming my love for Uchiha Itachi...
How is Naruto going to react to finding out more about Sasuke's past?! I'm so curious! And how is Sasuke going to feel when he opens up and lets Naruto in a little bit more?? Is Tsunade going to be there? So many questions! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
Did I mention that I love Itachi? Haha. I can't wait to see how you write him. What mental disorder does he have that keeps him in the hospital? This story follows the plotline that Itachi murdered Sasuke's family, right?? So why is Sasuke going to visit him still? Why was Itachi driven to madness? Man, I can't wait! I love Itachi. ^_^
Update soon please!! *begs shamelessly* And I really hope my review works this time >_< I hope I remembered everything I wrote in the first one... :(
So, in the middle of proclaiming my love for Uchiha Itachi...
How is Naruto going to react to finding out more about Sasuke's past?! I'm so curious! And how is Sasuke going to feel when he opens up and lets Naruto in a little bit more?? Is Tsunade going to be there? So many questions! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
Did I mention that I love Itachi? Haha. I can't wait to see how you write him. What mental disorder does he have that keeps him in the hospital? This story follows the plotline that Itachi murdered Sasuke's family, right?? So why is Sasuke going to visit him still? Why was Itachi driven to madness? Man, I can't wait! I love Itachi. ^_^
Update soon please!! *begs shamelessly* And I really hope my review works this time >_< I hope I remembered everything I wrote in the first one... :(
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!! I can't believe it! He went to visit Itachi! I <3 Itachi. Well, most of the time, anyway ;)
But, how is Naruto going to react when he finds out more about Sasuke's past??? I can't wait to see what happens! And I can't wait to see how this visit goes. It should be good! haha. Please update soon, I'm looking forward to it!
ps - jealous Naru is so cute!! ^_^ I just want to pinch his cheeks and ruffle his hair. Too cute!
But, how is Naruto going to react when he finds out more about Sasuke's past??? I can't wait to see what happens! And I can't wait to see how this visit goes. It should be good! haha. Please update soon, I'm looking forward to it!
ps - jealous Naru is so cute!! ^_^ I just want to pinch his cheeks and ruffle his hair. Too cute!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was surprising...
I thought Itachi was dead. Isn't that what you said earlier? Then again, I suppose you didn't specify...
WOW.
Oh, now I really hate you. Did you really have to post this chapter right before I have to leave? GAH!
Well, actually, I don't hate you. But that's besides the point. You are meant to feel my resentment, and should have told me not to read this chater until after!
Seriously! What kind of logic and sense do you have.
Okay, now I'm done insulting you, What do I have to say?
Poor guy at the station... I mean, if he loves Sasuke and all... He must feel horrible now...
Poor Sasuke too. Now he feels strange in the city. He should just get a horse and go live in the forest with Naruto XD XD XD
Yeah, stupid idea. Whatever...
Well, Now I really can't wait for the next chapters...
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I thought Itachi was dead. Isn't that what you said earlier? Then again, I suppose you didn't specify...
WOW.
Oh, now I really hate you. Did you really have to post this chapter right before I have to leave? GAH!
Well, actually, I don't hate you. But that's besides the point. You are meant to feel my resentment, and should have told me not to read this chater until after!
Seriously! What kind of logic and sense do you have.
Okay, now I'm done insulting you, What do I have to say?
Poor guy at the station... I mean, if he loves Sasuke and all... He must feel horrible now...
Poor Sasuke too. Now he feels strange in the city. He should just get a horse and go live in the forest with Naruto XD XD XD
Yeah, stupid idea. Whatever...
Well, Now I really can't wait for the next chapters...
XD LANE
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was surprising...
I thought Itachi was dead. Isn't that what you said earlier? Then again, I suppose you didn't specify...
WOW.
Oh, now I really hate you. Did you really have to post this chapter right before I have to leave? GAH!
Well, actually, I don't hate you. But that's besides the point. You are meant to feel my resentment, and should have told me not to read this chater until after!
Seriously! What kind of logic and sense do you have.
Okay, now I'm done insulting you, What do I have to say?
Poor guy at the station... I mean, if he loves Sasuke and all... He must feel horrible now...
Poor Sasuke too. Now he feels strange in the city. He should just get a horse and go live in the forest with Naruto XD XD XD
Yeah, stupid idea. Whatever...
Well, Now I really can't wait for the next chapters...
XD LANE
I thought Itachi was dead. Isn't that what you said earlier? Then again, I suppose you didn't specify...
WOW.
Oh, now I really hate you. Did you really have to post this chapter right before I have to leave? GAH!
Well, actually, I don't hate you. But that's besides the point. You are meant to feel my resentment, and should have told me not to read this chater until after!
Seriously! What kind of logic and sense do you have.
Okay, now I'm done insulting you, What do I have to say?
Poor guy at the station... I mean, if he loves Sasuke and all... He must feel horrible now...
Poor Sasuke too. Now he feels strange in the city. He should just get a horse and go live in the forest with Naruto XD XD XD
Yeah, stupid idea. Whatever...
Well, Now I really can't wait for the next chapters...
XD LANE