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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

person realitybites
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm always waiting with baited breath to see when the new chapter will come out and how it will unfold. I can't wait to read this one!!!
person thrillsandgills
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
beautifulll.....
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!! This caught me waaaay.... I dont even know! But it was good. ^^
person Kiiroi
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story can be described in one word. Amazing. that's all there is to it. Keep writing, i wish to read more ^-^
person MewMew2
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As soon as you described the scene of Sasuke entering the mental ward, and going to (obviously) meet Itatchi (Kisame's appearance clued me in), the song "Mad World" started playing in my head. Very appropriate song for midway/end of this chapter if I do say so myself. Excellent job. Please update again when you find the time to do so.
person Telpei
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, no more fighting! Yay, though, for make-up smex. I love Sasuke trying to picture Naruto as manly and cool. Too funny. This story makes me smile and gives me WAFF! I love it. I'm really curious about where they're going in the city!! Please don't make me wait too much longer and update soon! The suspense is killing me!!! :P
Great work so far, this was another fabulous chapter! I really enjoyed it. And I'm really happy they made up. I like happy chapters.
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't thinks of a time when I haven't read until the end... Even though I agree, reading until the end was important.
I'm supposing that Sasuke has to go see his paren't graves.... I'm probably right, but you could always make me wrong.
Poor Sasuke... So stressed out!
XD
Awesome chapter! Their first fight as a couple? What'll happen when Sasuke gets REALLY mad at him? I wonder...
Can't wait till Friday. Oh, and after that, no internet access, coz tiz the vacation (thank god!).
So you won't get my reviews for about three chappies...
XD LANE
person Studdedflower
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOAA! keep it a cumin! Hahaaa!
person masako
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY two chapters...it's like an early christmas. i am kind of curious how Kakashi is going to convince Iruka that it is ok to leave the two boys alone on a weekend. Plus, is Iruka ever going to get over the whole brother/family thing or is this fact still essential to the story? maybe not get over it...i dont know...i read the whole thing over again and it just sounds like he blames the two boys for ruining his not too public family plan. kind of bothers me a little for some reason. no biggie. moving right along...good stuff from your end. looking forward to more. Happy writing!!

ps. i just got to japan on Oct. 4th and i am here for one year. i'm just home sick because this is my first time leaving America...it'll pass.
person Telpei
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHhhhh what's going to happen next??? Where is Sasuke going to take Naruto??? It sounds like someplace sad that will drain him emotionally. Maybe a meeting with Tsunade? But she usually visits him outside of her office, right? Maybe his parents' graves? That's kind of solemn, I don't know if Sasuke would want to go there. But I'd say that's my best bet. I hope he's not taking Naruto to that music shop with oro-creep-aru. *sigh*. Anyway, please update soon!!! I can't wait to see where this story goes next. I almost want to go and read the old version of this story, just to see what happens... but the suspense of waiting for new chapters is half the fun. ^_^;
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I can't wait to read it. :D Keep up the awesome work, I'm loving every second of this story!!! *glomp attack*