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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please!!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We're 'play fighting'.
Riiiight. xD
I really like the fact that Sasuke isn't nervous or scared, but in contrary, calm.
Also, I really want to see how Naruto reacts toward the city.
Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
Riiiight. xD
I really like the fact that Sasuke isn't nervous or scared, but in contrary, calm.
Also, I really want to see how Naruto reacts toward the city.
Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A cliffhanger ish ending. Are you purposefully trying to be mean? And excuse my spelling if that word makes no sense. It's Friday.
Good two chapters though... I wonder where Sasuke's bringing NAruto...
Sounds... Suspicious! XD
Well, I guess I'll find out soon enough anyway...
XD LANE
Good two chapters though... I wonder where Sasuke's bringing NAruto...
Sounds... Suspicious! XD
Well, I guess I'll find out soon enough anyway...
XD LANE
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0.o Who should naruto be worrying about?! it-it can't be shikamaru right?! cause he only likes sasuke as a friend... or is kakashi just messing with him!? YOU MUST TELL ME!!! i will now agonize over it forever!(or until you tell you me) Please update as soon as you can! ::heart::
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhh who should Naruto be worried about? SHIKAMARUUUU!!!!!! ..>.> right? But Sasuke belongs to Naruto! >.< Let Shika get with Neji!!!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I enjoyed this. I love Naruto worrying about things going too well. Its like he's waiting for the other shoe to drop. ^^
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ehhhhhhhh!!!! that is sooo not cool...who does he have to worry about? no one is taking sasuke away right? i want to know. no fair....yeah so i'm 23 and whine like a 5 year old. maturity is an option. i will say it was a nice surprise getting out of class in japan to see this story was updated. i'm home sick so what better way to make me feel better then one fo my favorite stories being updated. can't wait for the next chapter...Happy writing!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww.
That is so sweet.
Naruto is worried about their first time.
Such a love dovey chapter (well for me)
Love the chapter!
That is so sweet.
Naruto is worried about their first time.
Such a love dovey chapter (well for me)
Love the chapter!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto!!!
Not only is he worrying his head off, but kakashi is teasing him too!
That musn't be very fun.
Konohamaru is funny. I wonder what he'll be like when he finds out that Naruto is the one that Sasuke is dating!
XD
Till Friday!!!
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Not only is he worrying his head off, but kakashi is teasing him too!
That musn't be very fun.
Konohamaru is funny. I wonder what he'll be like when he finds out that Naruto is the one that Sasuke is dating!
XD
Till Friday!!!
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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo, strange writting style for that last one, I have to say... Like, really strange. I like the chapter though.
SASUKE LIKES RIDDING!!!! XD Sorry, I couldn't resist that.
Seems like he's cooled down a lot now.
Well, can't wait for the next chappie!
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SASUKE LIKES RIDDING!!!! XD Sorry, I couldn't resist that.
Seems like he's cooled down a lot now.
Well, can't wait for the next chappie!
XD LANE