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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should totally keep going with this, it's just too good to wait for chapters!!!!
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL =^^=
Well, at least he had the decency to set her straight about him being gay. ;)
Keep up the good work.
Well, at least he had the decency to set her straight about him being gay. ;)
Keep up the good work.
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles slightly* Awww, little Sasuke is growing up! haha. He's trying to figure out the world... I just wish I had his insight ;) I always wonder what Naruto would say if he could hear Sasuke's thoughts, and this chapter got me wondering aobut it again. Would he be serious or try to joke about it? (haha don't mind my random musings...)
Do you have experience with horses??? I thought these chapters about riding were really well written! I don't have much experience with riding, but I thought you described it very well! :) Good job!
Keep those updates coming! When is Naruto coming back?
Do you have experience with horses??? I thought these chapters about riding were really well written! I don't have much experience with riding, but I thought you described it very well! :) Good job!
Keep those updates coming! When is Naruto coming back?
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love these two chapters.
The first one because I can sense how Sasuke felt in that field. (Beautiful Desccrpition By The Way)
And it felt soothing just reading it.
The second one because I love how you describe how Sasuke felt while riding the horse and that it somehow ties with regular life.
Enough rambling on my side, so in a nut shell --> It was awesome!
The first one because I can sense how Sasuke felt in that field. (Beautiful Desccrpition By The Way)
And it felt soothing just reading it.
The second one because I love how you describe how Sasuke felt while riding the horse and that it somehow ties with regular life.
Enough rambling on my side, so in a nut shell --> It was awesome!
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, too cute! I can't wait to see how Sasuke reacts to being on a horse! He didn't seem to like them very much when he saw Ino riding one up close. My favourite line of this chapter was Kakashi saying "it's time for morning sex now" haha. Priceless, and so like Kakashi. I love it! I'm looking foward to the next chapter!!! :D
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It good that Iruka is trying to understand Sasuke more and look like Sasuke is trying too.
I can't to read what happen next! This story is awesome!
I can't to read what happen next! This story is awesome!
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww yey, they're becoming friends! :D I like this version of this chapter better, I can understand Iruka better now. ^-^ And he's right, Sasuke's laugh WAS the most adorable thing evarrr~8D -squeal-
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Good chapter!
DOes this mean I get to see Sasuke on a horse? Because if that is true, I must tell you you're awesome! XD
Cool Iruka in this chapter. And you were right, this chapter make shim less of an annoying monster, and more of a constant worry wart.
I like Ino here too... I guess she's just. cool, you know? It's nice.
I can't wait for the part when Sasuke tells Iruka what happened.
Actually, has Sasuke told Naruto yet? Because, I don't quite remember, but I doubt it... Not the whole story anyway.
Well, can't wait for Friday's chapter!
XD LANE
DOes this mean I get to see Sasuke on a horse? Because if that is true, I must tell you you're awesome! XD
Cool Iruka in this chapter. And you were right, this chapter make shim less of an annoying monster, and more of a constant worry wart.
I like Ino here too... I guess she's just. cool, you know? It's nice.
I can't wait for the part when Sasuke tells Iruka what happened.
Actually, has Sasuke told Naruto yet? Because, I don't quite remember, but I doubt it... Not the whole story anyway.
Well, can't wait for Friday's chapter!
XD LANE
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH...Ino better get her hands off Naruto's bf. not cool...lol. good stuff. Happy Writing
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this story is just too cute! I adore it!! :D Please keep the updates coming!! I love reading every chapter, I never know what to expect (though that could be due to the unpredictable-ness of Naru-chan). I love your characterizations and your writing!! This story is awesome XD