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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing with that previous chapter a lot. Kakashi revealing the boys' relationship and Iruka's reactions.... priceless. =^^= Heh, at the end, when Iruka wanted to rush home because the boys were left alone together and Kakashi was like "why bother, they've already been alone this long" I couldn't help myself and shouted out "You're not helping!" lol hehehe

Seriously, I did laugh out loud. Keep up the good work! ^^
person Halskr
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the second to last paragraph the part about beacons. It was very well thought out and conjured nice visuals for the reader. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
person Yuikey
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30 and 31 was really good I can't wait to see Iruka's reactions...(^_^)
person Nanin
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cracked up hard on the 'At least they won't get pregnat'.

I'll remember that for the rest of the day! xD

Really great chapter.
Seriously can not wait until the next chapter.
person caidanu
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the lack of reviews on your fic lately…my life has been insanely busy.

But my goodness so much has happened. Molestations on the playground, the princess complex (XD), the Lee and Sasuke fight, Sasuke getting a hand job and then passing out, and I can’t wait to read Iruka’s reaction to Naruto and Sasuke being together.

I love Gaara in this, I know I’ve said it before but he’s such an evil little bastard messing with Naruto like that. He didn’t even have to try very hard either, just a few words and Naruto’s mind did the rest.

I’m not normally big on a lot of fics about the Naruto gang in high school because too many have way too much “Baby mama drama” for my tastes but I love this. I absolutely adore your fic. And I always look forward to the next update even if I can’t read it right away, I’ve got this one on my fav’s. This is one of my favorite fics out there right now.

Wonderful work as always *major glomps and molestations*
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was KICK ASS!!!!!! I have never before stayed up .... all night to read a story, it took me five hours!!! FIVE HOURS to read this and I still want more!! I urge you to post your next chapter, please and thatnk you kindly ^_^


~Vinyl_Bite
person realitybites
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really truly a fantastic installment of the story. i love the way you write and can't wait to read more!
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the first part of the chapter was just hilarious. Really it was. I loved gaara (as usal) and Kakashi was really awesome (also as usual).
And for the second part... Cute.
Poor Naruto. Sasuke is so frustrating...
XD
Well, that's about all I have to say.. So... Till tuesday.
Oh, and you should really make more funny bits like the first part of this chapter, because you are really good at it. It was really hilarious.

XD LANE
person Tessia
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, seriously, this is getting goooood.
Bestest fic i have read in a long time.
For the love of god keep up with the regualr updates
peace.
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww... hehehe =^^= Sasuke passed out! Poor Naruto, but hell, yay for taking the next step! ^^
Keep up the great work! :D