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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter.
That last part left me with a "Aww" face on.
Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
That last part left me with a "Aww" face on.
Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
COOL CHAPTER!!!
LOved it! Seriously. I was waiting for NAruto's reaction to the fight the whole chapter...
Actually, it wasn't such a big deal in the end, but it was really awesome anyway.
I love Gaara. He's awesome. You should have more Gaara. And more Shikamaru. And more fights.
Yup, you should really.
And some Itachi... Does he ever come into the story? Or is he just like backgroud past sort of thing?
Well, anyway, I loved the chapter, and Until Friday (and I had time this week! Amazing or what?)
XD LANE
LOved it! Seriously. I was waiting for NAruto's reaction to the fight the whole chapter...
Actually, it wasn't such a big deal in the end, but it was really awesome anyway.
I love Gaara. He's awesome. You should have more Gaara. And more Shikamaru. And more fights.
Yup, you should really.
And some Itachi... Does he ever come into the story? Or is he just like backgroud past sort of thing?
Well, anyway, I loved the chapter, and Until Friday (and I had time this week! Amazing or what?)
XD LANE
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww..sweetness from the Uzumaki. =^^=
Hmm, I wonder if he'll be taking Gaara's advice. (heheheheh) Although somehow I see him chickening out. Maybe keep taking it slow and just progress into oral? I'm sure Sasuke wouldn't say no to that. !!!
Keep up the good work!
Hmm, I wonder if he'll be taking Gaara's advice. (heheheheh) Although somehow I see him chickening out. Maybe keep taking it slow and just progress into oral? I'm sure Sasuke wouldn't say no to that. !!!
Keep up the good work!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really sweet. i love the pace of this story...it feels more like a real relationship. can't wait to read more. happy writing!!!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess it was high time those two met!
I laughed a bit at the 'He's not getting any today' joke with Naruto.
Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
I laughed a bit at the 'He's not getting any today' joke with Naruto.
Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally lee and Sasuke meet! I loved how you arranged it too, a fight!? That is just tooo perfect! ^_^ Keep up the wonderful work.
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay!!!
Good two chapters!
Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I didn't have ANY time, if you can believe it.
Anyway... Yeah, great two chapters. I like how where you're going with Naruto. He's getting more awesome.
I loved the fight thing though. I'd love to have some more of that in the story. It would really be awesome!
Anyway... You have a really weird mind you know... I mean, seriously... In a playgroud?
Well, till tuesday! Can't wait (and now I'm all gittery because of the end of that last chapter, I mean, where is the ending, it just like... Stopped you know... Like that... ANd I have to imagine Naruto's reactions... And Gaara's. I mean seriously)!
XD LANE
Good two chapters!
Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I didn't have ANY time, if you can believe it.
Anyway... Yeah, great two chapters. I like how where you're going with Naruto. He's getting more awesome.
I loved the fight thing though. I'd love to have some more of that in the story. It would really be awesome!
Anyway... You have a really weird mind you know... I mean, seriously... In a playgroud?
Well, till tuesday! Can't wait (and now I'm all gittery because of the end of that last chapter, I mean, where is the ending, it just like... Stopped you know... Like that... ANd I have to imagine Naruto's reactions... And Gaara's. I mean seriously)!
XD LANE
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^^
It seems, when Lee is not being a mini-Gai, that he and Sasuke get along just fine. :D
Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
It seems, when Lee is not being a mini-Gai, that he and Sasuke get along just fine. :D
Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Awesome! ^^
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much~! And the pace is so satisfying. Thanks.