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by Mashiro

schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so great!!! They are finally together. I'm so happy ^_^ It's going to be so much fun watching their relationship develope further from this point on.
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! Kisses!!! Kisses, kisses, and more kisses!!!

Ahhh, this story is sooo cute! I love it. This is great. This made my day. Soooo goddamn adorable. =^^=

Keep up the great work! <3
person realitybites
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet another fantastic chapter!! You do such a great job of capturing what being this age is like. Really just well written. I can't wait to see what happens next
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'M BAAAAACK!
And Jesus was it worth waiting to read that.
Poor Sasuke's pretty messed up isn't he? Well, at least he has Naruto... I loooooved the last part. Really. It Was so cuuuuuute!!!
About the 1st person thing with Gaara a few chapters back, I have to say that it was good. But I hate first person. XD
Anyway, yeah... That was good. It's really frustrating when you keep skipping from one person to the other, but it's really good. I'm just impatient, and don't like straying from my biggest interest aka Sasuke and Naruto.
But it's all vey informative and well written. I'd love to have some more Shika though. He's one of my favorite people, and I love him in this story (well I love him in most stories, but he's especially cool in this one)
Is it still tuesday and friday? I have to know when to expect the next chapter!
XD I've been waiting for this story all vacation!!! XD I'm so happy!!!!!!!!
And yes I really am grinning my head off. Anyway, I think that's all I can remember to say at the moment (I would have written a review for every chappie, but as I said, I'm impatient, I don't like the story being interrupted, and this is a particularly good story)...
Well, until next chapter!!!

XD LANE
person Timer
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay fluffy scene!!!
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy! Sasuke is finally opening up ...I think. I can't tell with these two, one moment thier all like 'Yeah!' and the next it's 'I don't know!' But I do love the drama ^_^
person Nanin
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for quite some time, and I must say that I love how it's going.
Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
person shoujo_sparkles
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, my favorite part, THE KISS!!! (:DDDDDD) i really really love this fanfic, and i want to read the new version of designed for confusion (i don't like Sakura but... poor Sakura...) i'm going to review in FF too, because you deserve a lot more reviews since your fanfic is so great ^^, bye!!!
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee!!! So snuggly and cute. I love that Naruto's insecurities finally got the better of him and forces a slight confession out of Sasuke. =^^=
I wonder what the raven will do when he finds out its Naruto's birthday tomorrow. hehehe


Keep up the great work.
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH! stop torturing me!! XD i am so in love with story-- i cant wait for the next chapter!