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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Ahhh, Sasuke trying to figure out his feelings is like watching a car crash, I just can't not watch!!! Hmm, that sounded weird *.*
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like Tsunande's therapy style. ^^

Keep up the good work!
person CkA
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the best~!
person Tsukiyuuri
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you must write more, it's just, so, so , AWESOME!!!!
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah! youre killing me with all these cliff-hangers!!! .......I LOVE IT!!! XD this story is so amazing i check it at least 4 times a day to see if theres an up date XD (dont tell anyone they might think i have no life!! ) well im super stoked for your next chapter-- please update soon!!!!
person caidanu
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke getting sick but at least it brought the two of them even closer. It seems that Sasuke's anxiety attack makes him more vulnerable to Naruto. And Naruto can be such a decent boy in this fic; he's so patient with Sasuke and so determined to marry him XD

I loved the Gaara and Lee chapter....I'm not a huge fan of Lee/Gaara but you do an excellent job of the both of their characterizations. I love how Gaara has a part of him that has always cared for people but he still had stuffed those feeling down and tucked them away. It's a very realistic interpretation of how people really can be.

Iruka is so neurotic in this fic but I love it. I keep thinking that he may be slightly OC and most definitely very anal about how he runs his life and daily routine XD I love it because I can definitely see Iruka making sure that he got up the same time everyday so that he didn’t screw up his routine. And how he dealt with Kakashi *nods head* and I can't wait to see how he deals with Naruto and Sasuke’s relationship, I'm sure he'll freak out about it at some point.

Keep up the wonderful work on this and I look forward to more.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh good. Iruka and Kakashi made up. I just love those two.
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...together??? What did i miss? ^_^
person Jelp
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha...hahaha...wow...that last line was just great: "We should buy him a cake and condoms." Somehow, that does seem to fit perfectly!

This has been a wonderful story to read. I know it's completed on fanfiction dot net, so I may take a peek over there, though this seems to have been more recently edited with more chapters - perhaps? Oh well. I may just need to sneak a peek anyway.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, though I don't know if I can wait long enough to just read it here of aff dot net. ~ Jelp
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a time jump right? Or did I miss something?

Lee and Gaara are cute together. ^^