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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

person masako
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was really good. i like this story and i can't wait to read more...Happy Writing!!!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....I think I have found my new favorite Author O.O
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D


Naruto knows. Shika knows. Everybody knows. Sasuke is so transparent. >:) hehehe
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah sasuke-- theres no denying your feelings! X3 cant wait to see whats in the next chapter!! XOXOXO
person caidanu
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shikamaru is one observant little shit, isn't he? He knows how Sasuke feels about Naruto even before Sasuke himself realizes it XD and poor Sasuke being so damn sick but it was sweet of Naruto to bring him his homework (although I had to laugh at the fact that Naruto's note had originally had Bastard written on it XD).
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha!!! Nobody likes to hear the truth. >:D
person caidanu
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was an interesting development...Kakashi and Iruka already dating and that being one of the main reasons why Kakashi decided to pack up and move XD Kakashi you little devil. I wonder what Sasuke will think when he finds out. And I can't wait to read more of how Sasuke deals with Naruto's little declaration of love that was in the previous chapter...it will be interesting.

I'm excited that this fic is so long, you really took the time to write this well and put a lot of thought into the detail with this fic. Again, wonderful work.

Cai

schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I never read teh original but I'm glad I'm getting a chance to read it now. (New and improved, or so I hear.)

Keep up the great work!

This is unrelated, but the new batman movie was phenomenal!!!! (I just need to say that somewhere...)
person caidanu
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Oh Sasuke you should have seen that one coming from a mile away.

And Naruto's so damn determined with his whole "I will marry you" issues. Sasuke's going to have to really work his ass if he wants Naruto to leave him alone and even then I have my suspicions that it won't work XD

Loved the chapter but then again I'm really enjoying the entire fic and that is an excellent idea to do review responses on LJ...I never even thought to use my LJ for that.

*glomps and humps*

Keep up the wonderful work.

PS, Don't worry about the accidental delete, it happens ;-)

Cai
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww i loved this chapter!! i admit that a little tear welled up ib my eye at the end there... XD cant wait to see what your wonderful mind comes up for the next chapter!! XOXOXOX