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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

person Nanin
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was jumping up and down in my seat!
I know (at least I'm very positive) at who the woman is!
(It's kind of obvious, but I always go with Murphy's law, so I can't say I know exactly. ^^;)

(I actually ran around my apartment saying 'I know!'
I'm always like that when I have a big hunch about something, or if some author left me with a cliffhanger.)

I loved the chapter!
In my head, it leads to a whole new set of drama that may occur. :D

But then again, a author can always have a trick up his sleeve... ;~;

School was... weird today.
Our teacher was actually smiling, which is a very rare sight to see.
And I blew up a whole gallon container with a small match.
I of course, ran like hell when I saw the thing burst, and literally jumped out of the way.
I'm starting to like our labs in my Science class. n_n
How was school/today for you? :}

Love~
person Nanin
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can someone say hormones? XD
And what's worse than hormones is trying thinking while they are raging through you.
(As Naruto can see...)

I couldn't help but laugh when I read it's barely been 10 days since they last became intimate, and they were already going crazy. XD
Imagine a year... poor Naruto would loose it.

Aww!
Naruto was willing to break his neck just to get a word across to Sasuke. n_n

I laughed a bit at Sasuke for not opening the window to Naruto, and having a big/loud conversation through the window.

And that ending..!
Aww~!

My birthday was great!
I was like a kid running around the whole park, and dragging my sister from ride to ride.
Then, I went home and cut the cake with my friends and family.
A perfect day~
Hope yours was good too!

Love~
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe, more like her loss, nice side fic. But what about what happen when Naruto was just at SasUKE's place with him on the ladder by his window?
person cynaga
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm crying for Naruto's mother...
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:D

Such a smiley chapter. ^^
person cynaga
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Too sweet!
person Nanin
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I could not stop laughing!
I had tears in my eyes! XD

I was talking on the phone with my friend while I was reading the chapter, which made my situation even more awkward.
(Oh did I get a good laugh. n_n)
It's going to take me a while before I make a decent phone call again. XD

Either Naruto has to have the strongest pride/bravery in the world if he can see them in the eye again.
(Because if I were him.... I would have needed a long therapy session before even talking to them.)

But I couldn't help but laugh at the even motion answering a phone during a 'intimate act'.

Poor Lee!
I think it's even more awkward for him than Gaara.
(No, I know it! XD)

Gaara is truly evil.
But, it makes it all so more interesting. n_n

Hope you had a good day!

Love~
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
!!!!

=^^= hehehehhehe hhahahahahahahahahaha aaaahhhhh haahahahahahhaahhahah!!!!


Too damn funny. Keep up the great work!
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao!!! that was hilarious! i cant believe this is the end....please make this not the end.... damn..

omg that was awesome!!

gaara is EVIL...lol...
person cynaga
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wish this wonderful story (more like a novel) would never stop. Thanks most talented writer.