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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That didn't turn out as expected. And wow! Sasuke can laugh?!?! Amazing ^_^
person Tessia
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of the best naruto sasuke fics i have come acroos in a long time. I love it and I cant wait to see some more chapters from you.
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its my first time reading the story, and it's getting better and better. I like that you're allowing the time for Sasuke's character to develop, and not rushing ahead him being all happy in suburbia.

Naruto is done very well, not exactly stupid, but not seeing the world like other expect.

Looking forward to the future chapters.
person CkA
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a perfectly delightful story! More, more!
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah! i cant get enough of this story!!! my heart literally jumped from my chest when i saw there was an update!! XD and this chapter was so unbelievable good too!! cant wait to se what happens next-- PLEASE POST SOON!!!! X3 XOXOXO (those are for you lol XD
person gaara89
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god you have to update as soon as possible!
person caidanu
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this fic the other day and absolutely love it.

I love how Naruto just doesn't know when to quit with Sasuke and how he's able to push Sasuke's buttons even though Sasuke tries to resist giving him a reaction (and fails every time). Naruto is so determined at getting Sasuke to interact with him that it's almost boderline stalking XD

Your sense of humor is great in this fic. I love how Iruka is torn in chapter nine as to whether or not to use his firm parenting skills with those two and his ineer need to be polite to Sasuke becasue he's a guest *chuckles*

I look forward to the next chapter. Wonderful job with the characterizations.

Cai


schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...I wonder what pervy thoughts naruto is thinking >_>
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
xDD That was freaking hilarious. Love the new spin on the latest chapter. Iruka and Naruto were less 'perfect' and the chapter was kinda amusing. Sasuke has no idea what he's in for. XD Also happy you added more of the canon competition, I really like how you've changed their interaction in this version; Naruto seems less like a pining pushover. And Sasuke's succumbing against his will to Naruto; so canon! Love it! ^0^ Can't wait to see the next chapter. :3
person Lane
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I should so not have read this chapter. Seriously. Because this time, I most definitely don't get a chance to see the next one...
Now, I'm going to be miserable that I didn't see this for a while...
Bah. That is soooooooo annoying.
But, you would have thought that Sasuke was slightly more smart. AND WHAT IS IT WITH YOU DROPPING HINTS LIKE THAT!!!
That's just meaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!! Seriously!!!! You can't do that to people. Namely : me.
It's just mean.
Well, this is my last review till September... -sniff sniff-
Oh, well. See you then...
XD Can't wait for the next chapter. Even if I have to wait 2 months... About.
Good luck!!!!
XD LANE