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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

person MewMew2
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the interlude, always up for some IrukaxKakashi loving. Please update again when you can.
person starriecat
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 8)
Awww, they are just soo kewt and mushy. xD I just love them. <33
person CkA
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story - great writing and characterization.
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much! at first i have to admit i was a little wary aboujt reading but boy am i glad i did!! XD i love that thing about the secret club lol its just too adorable -- please update as soon as you can because i am just dying to read the next chapter!!!!! XOXOX
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmph. It's a good thing you appologised in advance, or I would be yelling at you right now (in capital letters,no less). That was much shorter than your normal chapter though. (you know it, I know it, there isn't anything I can do about it... Pffff)
Sounds like Kakashi and Iruka are getting on really well...
Last chapter, I thought that Kakashi had like, rearanged all of his room or something, and thrown out the boxes, but this chapter seems to have changed that... My bet is that he finally found the lock on the door... And wrote a note... (well that was obvious) telling him where to get his dinner... (is he actually going to go? Let alone EAT?)
Anyway, where has his cigarette addiction gone... His packet must have run out (by the end of the first day...). But he doesn't seem to be smoking much...
Hehe, Kakashi's curse. He knows alot. Maybe someone should give the crab explanation to Naruto... XD

Well, waiting impatiently for the next chapter (can't do it otherwise...) and you had better make the next one longer... Or there will be many capital letters...

Oh, and the next chapter will most likely be the last one I read before september... If it isn't this one. (But I think I'll be able to read at least the next one). So, I won't be reviewing (sorry, I would love to review, and to read, but hey, it's hard when I don't have internet...) =(

Anyway... Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Way to go!!! Looooooooooove the story!!
XD LANE
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh. That...; That. That is mean.
Seriously! I mean, he gets all better and stuff, and then you stop it just when it's about to be hilarious. Seriously.

Other than that, liked the chapter. Lots of Kakashi and Sasuke, and that was awesome. I wish you would just tell us what was going so wrong in the city that he HAD to move though. It's getting... Frustrating. Yes, I know suspence, okay, I'm impatient and you'll get to it. Jeez.
But I really want to see naruto's reaction to Sasuke skipping school. As well as Sasuke's when he gets home. And I still love Kakashi. He's way awesome.

Is Itachi going to be in this story any? Hey, maybe that was the reason they moved...

Maybe not.
Well, until tuesday right? Either way, I feel it is my duty to say this: Update soon!!!

XD LANE
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love love love! this fic!!! It's wonderfully entertaining.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drools at the promise of 67 chapters (it's like a fangirl's wet dream)* I love your story, it's so cute!! haha, I can't wait until Sasu's like "OH SHIT!! I LIKE HIM! @%6@$#^ !$%!$$#!!!!!" uber kawaii. Oh~ and that would totally suck to have a wet dream be censored (even if it was only the language, kinda defeats the whole point, you know?) Poor Naru-chan...Anyways, I love your story <3 If you don't have one already, I'd love to beta for you...please? *grovels* My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko@yahoo.com Let me know either way, ok? *bows at your feet* please continue transposing all your greatness into writing, oh enlightened one *bow, bow*

~Miranda
person Miranda
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah~ Sorry about this, stupid aff cut off the second part of my post...so...let's try this again, shall we?

*drools at the promise of 67 chapters (it's like a fangirl's wet dream)* I love your story, it's so cute!! haha, I can't wait until Sasu's like "OH SHIT!! I LIKE HIM! @%6@$#^ !$%!$$#!!!!!" uber kawaii. Oh~ and that would totally suck to have a wet dream be censored (even if it was only the language, kinda defeats the whole point, you know?) Poor Naru-chan...Anyways, I love your story <3 Um, if you don't already have one, I'd love to beta for you...please? *grovels at your feet* My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko@yahoo.com Let me know either way, ok? *bows* Please continue transposing your awe-inspiring magnificence into writing, oh Enlightened One *bow, bow*
person Miranda
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok...I give up with trying to get the whole post together, BUT I SHALL BE HEARD!!! um...so...like I was trying to say in the last two posts (that aff so rudely cut short) I would absolutely love to beta for you! Please let me know if you ever want a beta. My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com Please let me know either way...ok?

*bow* Please continue transposing your awe-inspiring magnificence into written fandom, oh Enlightened One *bow, bow*

~Miranda