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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter, i didn't no u posted it here, i was so happy when i found out. i read it first with lj.

can't wait to read more
person shoujo_sparkles
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello, i love almost sucks, i love it so so much that i printed the entire thing... OMG more than 100 pages... (arial 7.5 .8mm space, i think i'm going blind XD)i think i will be reading the second, new and improved almost sucks but this time online, because... (more than 100!!!! and in arial 7.5....is like a really big book with really small letters XDDD)will be weaiting for the epilogues bye
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Like it! Please continue. ^_^
person Lane
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your writting style. It's seriously awesome.
Poor Sasuke, it seems he's going to be taking a while to adjust...
XD Please post the next chapter soon!!
person GMHR
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEE!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *fangirls all over you* It's being posted, and then there will be epilogues, and, and *explodes*. I'm so excited! I liked the changes you made in this chapter. Sasuke seems angrier and like he really wants to leave. Not that he was all that accepting before, but in the first version it was more like he was kinda going along with stuff whereas now his distaste and annoyance and frustration over Kakashi and being dragged somewhere that he does not want to be is clearer. Looking forward to the next chapter...
person Meep
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe

When I started to browse the new stories posted here on aff I came across the title of a fanfic Ive been following for years - but there was only one chapter. I thought "wtf, is someone trying to steal this great awsome story of doom?!" and I went on to the reviews and to my horror I found 3 innocent newbcakes that had decided to praise this Thief to the skies! Have they not read Naruto fanfic lore?! Do they not know that this story is one of the "must reads before continuting"?!
Filled with unexplainable rage I decided to take a better peek at this Destroyer of Innocence before calling the Fanfiction Police to have the guy arrested... but after starting to read my eyes turned into big Os.

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Cause apparently there was no thief

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Welcome to AFF, Ive been waiting patiently for this story to have an official ending :P
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the first chapter.. and I'm so looking forward to the following ones. I hardly ever read stories on FF.net, and I don't know the first version. I'm also not a person that reviews often or regulary, but I want you to know that I added the link to my favourites and I'll check on updates. :)
Hehe, reading made me feel like being a teenager again. And I can understand Sasuke's aversion to "perfect towns" and "faked smiles, happiness,..."