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that was wonderful...tho this was by far the shortest chapter you've written, but it was still written wonderfully...keep up the excellent work and please update soon!!!!

i cant wait to see how fast they break the rules...lol

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*

Damn I hate my laptop with all the strength in my heart. >:{
I was on a plane to Mexico (from about Sunday), and I tried to review the previous chapter, and the bastard died on me!
The internet completely shut down once I crossed the border!
I was so angry!
(My parents wanted to celebrate my birthday early.
I don't know why, it’s on the 25th)
I'm very sorry I was late. :{

As for chapter 64: '
It was a magical son/father moment! n_n
It goes to show you that even the most 'collected' of people have a hint of worry for their young ones.

My mouth dropped when Kakashi said that Sasuke was drugged when he came home.
How could he 'do' something, without knowing what it was.
That is what all parents tell you from a young age!
(Never drink/try anything you don't know what it is)
But I guess Sasuke had a habit of closing off his 'common sense' part, and just go with a flow, back then.

I've learned from experience that those last words Kakahshi gave, are a relief to the soul.
For them to say "I'm sorry. It was my responsibility to tell you to stop. And say 'no'" is a heaven wrapped together in a sentence.
And I see Sasuke saw likewise. n_n

And that hug!
Aww~

Chapter 65:

I know that scent. n_n
The scent of you finally being at ease, knowing that somewhere out of these walls, there is a roof you can call home.
Knowing that the there will be someone there inside that house, waiting for you to come home.
Such a warm feeling it is. n_n

I think that Orochimaru didn't drug him for a sexual rush, nah.
He doesn't seem the type.
I think he did it to let Sasuke escape his worries of the day.. and the past.
Let him free from the bars of insanity, and let him rush away to 'rush' of his own.
Even though he knew it was going to harm him.
But I think Orochimaru knows the feeling of being afraid, of the past and future.
And his presence is almost a haven to Sasuke, in his time of need.
I may be over thinking things, but, eh, that's what rushed past my mind while I was reading it. :}
(And yeah it was true! Without him, Sasuke wouldn't have never moved and so on..) :]

I see Iruka is warming up to Sasuke. n_n
Won't be long now...

Breaking the rules already I see! XD
Hormones will be the death of them! :}

A home will always be a home.
No matter how many years you leave, it'll always be there.
And you can't help but remember all the memories you passed there.
Good and bad ones.

I knew it!
Gaara's grin can only mean one thing! XD
Poor Sasuke, he was very embarrassed when Gaara pronounced it to the world to hear about their previous night. XD

(Oh and I see Choji was thrown into the pot.
Poor kid, to be woken up for a house tour.)

I'm very curious to see what's inside the envelope. :O

And yet through all the drama that happened, everything seems at peace. :}

Again, I'm very sorry I missed a chapter.
*grumble* stupid lousy internet service*grumble*

Can't wait to read the sequels! n_n

Love~

Complete?

Yes? This feels like a completed to me... :D


Congratulations on finishing your story!! This story was amazingly awesome and I absolutely loved it. ^^
If there is still more coming than I will look forward to it, if not, then it doesn't matter because this chapter made for a wonderful ending. ^^

Keep up the great work! I'll look forward to more things of yours in the future.

This might seem like a really stupid question so i give you full permission to ignore it but do you have kids? Your insight into the emotional feelings of parents is pretty amazing if you never had any. Those intructional books don't tell you how you are going to feel in certain situations...so how ever you guessed it it's really pretty astounding to me.

I'm kind of torn between Kakashi's decision about Orochimaru. I agree he is bad for Sasuke but like i said i just really like that character i don't want to see him leave. Why does Saauke need him anyways? That's me just thinking about loud....anyways...good stuff...Happy Writing!

So moving~!

Kitchen Table Sex?
Well that's the first time I hear that. xD

Poor Naruto!
He was having a marvelous dream, only to interrupted by Iruka. D;
And not to mention, naked in a bed with your boyfriend....
(If I were in his shoes, I would have fainted in embarrassment!)

I couldn't help but laugh when Naruto confessed that they had sex and, and Sasuke said ".second time was good."
I don't think they really need to hear that. xD

Naruto fails to realize one thing:
Iruka said no for a month.
Meaning that after a month, they have the permission to do it again as many times as they would like.
So I guess Iruka finally saw that they love one another, and he can't change it. :D

It's funny how in a dream, you have all the courage in the world, and no one can beat you.
Then you wake up and all that pride is washed away. ;~;

I thought it was sweet when Sasuke and Naruto tried to take the blame from one another. n_n
All for one, and one for all.

Time to party! :D
I hope your New Years was good! n_n

Love~

LMAO!!! that WAS LOVE!!!

OMG...no sex for a month?!! naruto better be very creative... and iruka was actually ...amiable about things. this was great!
keep up the excellent word and update soon....please

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*

Hahahahhahaha.... Iruka is scary as fuck! >:D

I loved Sasuke's reaction to punishment. Going from never being grounded to Iruka Grounded has got to be harsh. Although I love Naruto's loop hole mentality.
Keep up the great work! ^^

Woot!
'Easy Slide' came back for the killing! xD

I was blushing mad when I read this chapter!
I swear, when I went to get something from the bathroom, my face was red. xD
(Sex as a general topic makes me stutter/blush.)

But the situation was essential.
It's not like they're going to run away from it forever because the first attempt wasn't successful!
Of course they are going to be hesitant at first, but I'm glad they didn't stop fully.

And that 'I love you'
Ahh, music to my ears. (or eyes) xD
I was wondering when Sasuke was going to say it, and I must say, he said it at the right moment. n_n

Some tears that were needed to be shed, were finally let go I see.
I know that feeling. :}
I'm glad that finally happened. n_n

I laughed my ass off when Naruto wiped Sasuke fingers on the blanket.
I was near tears!
(I imagined the face of a homemaker mother finding this certain 'stain' on a blanket... and she has a son.) xD

I had to feel bad for Shikamaru.
He longed for a different relationship with Sasuke, but at the same time fearing it.
All the while, he knows that he will come up empty handed, because he knows Sasuke won't return the feelings. :{
(But at least he knows, and it won't leave a regretting feeling of 'what if and 'maybe if' if you catch my drift.)

The shower situation had me in a rut of giggling madness.
Poor Naruto trying not to get in over his head, and Sasuke is trying to sabotage it. xD

The chapter was both Romantic/sweet and sexy.
(Very good combination! n_n )

Now I sense another layer of trust was put between them. n_n
(and another layer of affection.)

Sorry I reviewed so late. :{
My family and I went to go celebrate in Las Vegas.
(Wedding).
I spent a great deal of time there, so excuse my tardiness. :{

Ohh,and before I forget: Happy New Year! n_n

Hope your year is filled with joy and prosperity.

You know I love you. :}