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for Almost Sucks

by Mashiro

person Nanin
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot!
Some action!
Now things are getting very interesting.

I never thought it was a bomb. ._.
That literally shocked me.
(I thought it was a big gun of some sort, but a bomb?)

Poor Naruto.
All that is on his mind right now is getting back Sasuke.
He's so committed, that he doesn't care that he has to risk his life.
That's what I call true love. n_n

Alright, I'm left at the edge of my seat right now.
I'm going to try very hard to be patient. ;~;

Ah, Christmas is only a few days away.
I always love this holiday. n_n
You?

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigosh!!

Is he telling the truth or is it a lie?? O_O Sasuke *did* say he wanted to go back home... but Orochimaru is eeeevvvviiiillllll ((o_o))

Gah!


You need to update already. I know this chapter just came out... but now I need the next one quick!
person Nanin
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aahh.
The coziness. n_n

Whoa, are Sasuke and Naruto dead.
Big time.
I know that if I were in their shoes, my parents would call the cops, and they wouldn't pick me up until the very next day.
(My parents have a weird sense of 'parenting skills')

It's kind of nice to have you father/parental guardian, know that you are truely in love.
For them to know that this is 'the one' for you, and to step aside for you to make the decisions.
Now that is a true gift.

Poor Kakashi.
He has always worried for Sasuke, and now, that the trouble is grave, he is panicking.
I hope he gets some peace of mind soon.

Hope you enjoy the snow over there!

Love~
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah@!!! Time gap!! Time freaking gap!!!!

Last chapter was early early Sunday morning. Iruka and Kakashi got home late Sunday night. I KNEW IT!!! Something horrible has happened!! Gah! Why do you keep doing this to me-- them! I meant them. *ahem.



Keep up the good work.
person MewMew2
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the check in with Kakashi and Iruka. Please update once more when you have the time.
person Nanin
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what I love about December?
Lying in your cozy blanket, warm with hot chocolate, while reading your favorite story.
Ah, that's what I call tranquility.

You know what is funny.
You're the very first author who does not make Orochimaru the antagonist in the story (When they include his character).
Very first.
It's kind of nice to see Orochimaru from a different perspective, and not the same old (He's evil!) one.
And more into a 'I'm a buddy' type.
(I think you did a pretty good job 'capturing' him)

Is that true?
That the look in someone's eyes go when virginity is taken away?
(The childish innocence?).
I never heard of seeing an innocence taken away straight from the eyes.
That's interesting.

The saying ' You never appreciate something until it's gone' comes to mind.
I know from experience that it is very true.
And I see that Sasuke can say the same thing.

Venting is easy.
Almost too easy.
Thinking, on the other hand, is very hard.
Reflecting, almost near impossible, depending on the situation.
I'm glad Sasuke is actually taking the harder route, and not wasting his time.

This chapter got me thinking/reflecting quite a bit.
(Which I hardly ever get the time to do.)
I had to call my parents/family that I loved each and every one of them.
(I had the urge. Probably from the chapter).

So I thank you for that. :}

Loved the chapter.
Hope your day was good!
Love~
person MewMew2
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you've written Orochimaru. You have his character down to a 'T'. Excellent job! Please update once more when convenient for you.
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was kind of weird... Like... Really.
Orochimaru is... Weird.
That word is incredibly useful isn't it?
I thought we'd have some more Shika this chapter. Or some Naruto. But we got some Sasuke instead.
Yay. That boy is incredibly messed up though...
Well, can't wait for the next one!
XD LANE
person Sigart
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Oh dear.
I'm so glad Sasuke realized what a good fellow Naruto is and how good he is for his fucked up mind, but... I somehow think that this means that Orochimaru won't allow him to go. Like because now that he realized that Sasuke's in love with someone else, he'll realize Sasuke won't be coming around and so Sasuke won't ever take over Sound and so it's totally OK to rape him. AAAAAARG! Must. Not. Happen.

Please update! Soon! Please?
person realitybites
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh so glad to get an update!! and definitely pouting because i'd like to know what is going on behind orochimaru's never virgin eyes. i suppose the mystery is alright and the tension as we wait for him to do something that reveals himself as undeniably a pedophile or undeniably bad is somehow pleasant ^_^