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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww thank goodness lol, the blonde has been found. All that searching and he's home asleep. Nice fic, I happily await the next chap. I want to how the convo with Sasuke will go.
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, the site says you need to add the proper disclaimer, otherwise your story stays hidden from the readers..
and i'm interested - the title intrigues me (especially if its Naruto..)
and i'm interested - the title intrigues me (especially if its Naruto..)
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh! I'm going to panic. Aside from the already hectic feelings I was getting in this chapter when Naruto seemingly dissappeared (Now that Mandara's planning to take action against him sooner than their plans), my mind moved to the worst when Shizune came in the office right after they left to drop off her completed cure for the cursed seal. She left it on the desk! Alone! The council is plotting to assassinate Tsunande! I just know someone's going to grab it and muck with it so that the cure becomes another curse.. or worse.. death!! I just can't deal with that right now! (You know, on Naruto's behave. Yeah.. that's it. ç_ç)
Anyway, keep up the awesome work! This is my first time reading this and I'm really enjoying this story. There's a lot going on politically and I believe this is the first fan fic I've stumbled across that actually addresses the issues brought up in the manga recently about Itachi's loyalty and the averted Uchiha betrayal. Crazy stuff! ^^
Anyway, keep up the awesome work! This is my first time reading this and I'm really enjoying this story. There's a lot going on politically and I believe this is the first fan fic I've stumbled across that actually addresses the issues brought up in the manga recently about Itachi's loyalty and the averted Uchiha betrayal. Crazy stuff! ^^
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All right! A new chapter of "The Revenge". Definitely well worth the wait. Naruto and Sasuke are so cute together! I can't understand what the villagers' problem is, I mean the Fourth Hokage was Naruto's father. Sheesh. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. :)
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chaps 1-6 just finished reading. yay like the action and romance so far. lol at naruto's if this is the welcome I get maybe I should leave more often. the pranked ba-chan was hilarious.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's a Yaoi section: use it.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
to Cavpal: In the summary, it is clearly marked M/M. If you don't like, don't read. I'm not the first, nor will I be the last to upload yaoi or yuri fanfics under the 'General' heading.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee. Sasuke got a crash course on sex from Kakashi. Tsunade is a very angry woman. I can't imagine what she would look like dressed as Naruto! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo funny! I can just see Baa-chan looking like Naruto and chasing Sasuke. Very good comedy!
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now that was some MAJOR hijinks!!! ROTFLMFAO! oh god!!! I really LOVE what sasuke did to Tsunade! orange jacket, short blonde spikes and the whisker marks!!!! LOL
got any other goodies stashed? we all KNOW you do! so keep up the good work my dear!
laters! ~_^
got any other goodies stashed? we all KNOW you do! so keep up the good work my dear!
laters! ~_^