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for Fade to Gray

by emeraldfire84

schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what the hell? I wrote you an awesome review and all that came out was omg?

Basically I said, you are my hero. hehe. I seriously love this. This is one of the top 3 Ita/Saku ever written. It's THAT good. You, my dear, have just earned yourself the title of Ita/Saku god right up there with Leafy and Cynchick. And omg HAWT!
person kira_oka
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey =]
Oh my gosh...This is an amazing story. I never cry when I read stories but this one was just amazing. Even if it was just a oneshot. You are a very talented writer, so keep it up! I'd love to see you write more stories. If you have anymore you would like to show me, I would be honored. I hope you keep writing. =]

xoxo
Kira_Oka (Dark Cherry Blossom)
person kira_oka
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha oh! And I also LOVE your story Stripped Bare. That is amazing as well. Like I said you have a wonderful talent so keep it up. =]]]

xoxo,
Kira_Oka
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, this pairing is really hard to write. However you did it well. A lot of times you get this Sakura betrays the village (although there are a few I've read that seemed to work) or it's all about Itachi raping her and warping her mind for his own nefarious reasons ( I have yet to read that particular plot and be pleased with it). It all comes down to the same thing, the writers that tend to focus on this pairing (I'm generalizing here so don't choke me) don't realize the subtleties that come with getting enemies together, there is no black and white. When it comes to bitter enemies a writer must realize the shades of gray, the details, what drives the human soul, and the fact that nothing is ever that cut and dried. Even though this was written as a one shot for a contest prize, you had enough back story to drag it out quite a bit. Very nice, I always enjoy your stuff. If it has your name on it, I'll read it baby! Keep writing!!! And wow am I behind on the manga, is it true that the elders ordered it, cuz I always suspeted something political on the inside. Man I need to catch up!
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! ONce more you amaze me with your stories! I love it sooo much! I i dont know what else to say except damn! XD

I'm glad Sakura was pregnant at the end, I truly loved that!
person mike
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I hope you decide to continue the story as this chapter was very well done.
person supersaiyanjoy
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!(I love all of your stories anyway) I only saw a few grammar errors but it was nothing that I couldn't figure out. I think you portrayed Sakura and Itachi very well to there characters. Very well written and great job on the lemon. Can't wait to read more from you and can't wait for you to update Stripped Bare. :D