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for So Help Me God

by lexjamandme

person Kim
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More my god more! I just read it and man why isn't there more? I must find out the rest. It's really good. I'm going to read your other stories now. But still finish this one if not for the bet, if not for me, do it for the sake of just doing it. God that sounded so wrong.

Oh well I hope to see more soon. Contact me by email if you like. Oh yah have a great day and once again awesome job. ^_^
person Kat
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, I really like this and want to read more will you be continuing it? i hope so!
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, this reminds me a lot of Children of Men. Except... you know... Naruto's not pregnant. I liked this a lot, even with dark!Sasuske. Thanks, and update soon, please!
person Danni
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...i love your work and i stand by the sasunaru to the end but that was awesome! you NEED to continue it! I MUST NO!!!!! Please! pwety pwety please with naruto and sprinkles on top?
person Mija
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is this a one shot or will there be more??? I am with you, I am a total SasuNaru/NaruSasu which ever way you want em fan, I love them together, but this story is sooo interesting and quite believable and it has soooo much yet untold and yet to bee seen I must read more, I soo hope you update, I forgot to check the date, for all I know its been abandoned, I hope not, its a really great start, I like it and I have to find out why Naru is Sasu's weakness if they were only best friends and why Naru left and why Sasu wants him back so much if he is his weakness, so much left unsaid, I hope you continue and I get to have all my questions answered, either way totally loved the read, excellent writing, thank you much for sharing, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Ash365
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really amazing first chapter! I hate Sasuke for what he did to Iruka. Poor Naru he's so cynical and bitter. I hope that in time him and Kakashi can bring some happiness to eachother...

I have to wonder what sort of relationship Naruto and Sasuke had, was it brothers, best friends or pet and master? Why is Sasuke so detirmed to get Naruto back? I can't wait to find out the answers.

Please, please, pretty please with blueberries on top update soon!!!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont know if you were planning on this being only one chapter or not but it would be a spectacular story if you were to continue it. As much as I love Sasuke I think you did a good job making him evil. I like the way the story is progressing and I hope to see more.
person blur
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot! Erm... I think you will write the questions I have in your later part of the story... But I still have to ask them.

Who did Naruto ran away with?

And Why would he run away?

Is Sasuke in love with Naruto and Naruto, being the dense one, did not find out?

Or do they really treat each other as brother?

It is ok not to answer my questions. Because I know I will find out the answers when I continue to read your story. ^_^
person Vibora
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great! you've gotta keep going! ...please!?!!
person Kitsuko
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please post ? I really like your story and althought you said it's hard to write something like this with Sasuke
as a bad guy ( in which I completely understand you) you are doing a great job :) Continue