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February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(...I think, in order to combat fear, I imagined Ami galloping after the rat like a quadruped. Which was funny, if a little disturbing.)
And this is well-written, you know? Very steady pace.
And this is well-written, you know? Very steady pace.
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: Lol, spider-shove. XD
“Another round.” I don’t like spiders, but this is really funny, the idea of Sasuke training with a spider. _ _ _ _ “Cute display.” Right. (*shudders*)
I’m guessing Sasuke was knocked unconscious and is dreaming…?
Yup. _ _ _ _ And it looks like Sai was knocked out too. That must’ve been one hell of a fall. Did Sai hit his head on something on the way down? Because just a trip shouldn’t do that to someone. _ _ _ _ OUCH. Seriously, what did he hit his head on? _ _ _ _ Good, he’s awake. _ _ _ _ I hope the headache isn’t worse than it seems. I also hope that fall didn’t jar Sai’s memory or something. _ _ _ _ Why the ugly stare?
Well, Sai seems okay. _ _ _ _ “How did Naruto put up with the traitor’s obnoxious attitude so effortlessly?” Except for the “traitor” part, I could ask the same thing about Sai. _ _ _ _ Sasuke really hates being shrunk.
I wonder what Tsunade misled Naruto about.
Ooh, good one, Sasuke. “Replacement.” Ouch. _ _ _ _ Sasuke seems to naturally make enemies as Naruto naturally makes friends. _ _ _ _ Sounds like Sasuke wasn’t going to listen to Sai anyway, angry or not.
Jeez, what the hell are they doing to him??
Interesting backstory on Ami and what kind of spider she is. _ _ _ _ Haha, the yaoi manga. XD _ _ _ _ I can imagine Sai’s jump when Sasuke shows up. _ _ _ _ Yeah, Sai, you SHOW him that stuff. _ _ _ _ And how would Kyuubi know about the jutsu on Sasuke? _ _ _ _ Okay, how the hell can ANYONE do that with Sasuke while he’s in this state? Particularly trying to leave a hickey.
Okay, I’m not exactly sure about what it was Tsunade was doing to Naruto, or why the Kyuubi suddenly “attacked” Sai and Sasuke.
“Another round.” I don’t like spiders, but this is really funny, the idea of Sasuke training with a spider. _ _ _ _ “Cute display.” Right. (*shudders*)
I’m guessing Sasuke was knocked unconscious and is dreaming…?
Yup. _ _ _ _ And it looks like Sai was knocked out too. That must’ve been one hell of a fall. Did Sai hit his head on something on the way down? Because just a trip shouldn’t do that to someone. _ _ _ _ OUCH. Seriously, what did he hit his head on? _ _ _ _ Good, he’s awake. _ _ _ _ I hope the headache isn’t worse than it seems. I also hope that fall didn’t jar Sai’s memory or something. _ _ _ _ Why the ugly stare?
Well, Sai seems okay. _ _ _ _ “How did Naruto put up with the traitor’s obnoxious attitude so effortlessly?” Except for the “traitor” part, I could ask the same thing about Sai. _ _ _ _ Sasuke really hates being shrunk.
I wonder what Tsunade misled Naruto about.
Ooh, good one, Sasuke. “Replacement.” Ouch. _ _ _ _ Sasuke seems to naturally make enemies as Naruto naturally makes friends. _ _ _ _ Sounds like Sasuke wasn’t going to listen to Sai anyway, angry or not.
Jeez, what the hell are they doing to him??
Interesting backstory on Ami and what kind of spider she is. _ _ _ _ Haha, the yaoi manga. XD _ _ _ _ I can imagine Sai’s jump when Sasuke shows up. _ _ _ _ Yeah, Sai, you SHOW him that stuff. _ _ _ _ And how would Kyuubi know about the jutsu on Sasuke? _ _ _ _ Okay, how the hell can ANYONE do that with Sasuke while he’s in this state? Particularly trying to leave a hickey.
Okay, I’m not exactly sure about what it was Tsunade was doing to Naruto, or why the Kyuubi suddenly “attacked” Sai and Sasuke.
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just read all the chapters. I love, love, love Sai in this. Can't wait for more.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH!!! You stopped THERE! Seriously! OMG!! *Pushes you into computer chair. Sets up keyboard. Gives you cookies and lots of VERY strongly caffinated beverages.* Write!! Uh... please? :-)
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March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I found this... and read it from start to finish... at work (you are totaly gonna get me fired.) I REALLY hope there is more coming its a great story and I think you're doing VERY well with all the charecters. I love your Sai and I'm not a huge Sai fan. I love the placid exterior but the depth you've given him. It works for me and makes him more likable. I just ADORE how Sasuke and Naruto love each other with out question even if Naruto is too much of a Dobe to see how hot he is for Sasuke and that he's having a quasi-relationship with Sai.
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely, lovely story. Sasuke being so small and vulnerable and cute made me nearly squeal in glee. Love this and hope to see updates soon.=)
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love! "Scale" please continue to write it, you are doing a wonderful job, and Sasuke, tiny as he is, what an adorable predicament Sasuke is in and poor Naruto, so completely cute and good action in it and good sense of character and creativity. Your story is unique and wonderful.
please continue to write more of this story... *_*
please continue to write more of this story... *_*
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your going to a con too? Coolies. Have fun.
Anyways I'm loving this story, though I do wonder when Sasuke will be full-sized again. Tsunade a bit of a bitch to Naruto, though I guess it could be excused as her trying to do what's best for the greater good. Sakura is a bit of a contradiction, she's a bit nasty but a bit nice. I dunno, not sure whether to like her or hate her. I can't wait to see more from this story, especially to see more specifics on what Naruto's mission entails. Can't wait for your next update.
Anyways I'm loving this story, though I do wonder when Sasuke will be full-sized again. Tsunade a bit of a bitch to Naruto, though I guess it could be excused as her trying to do what's best for the greater good. Sakura is a bit of a contradiction, she's a bit nasty but a bit nice. I dunno, not sure whether to like her or hate her. I can't wait to see more from this story, especially to see more specifics on what Naruto's mission entails. Can't wait for your next update.
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh I LOVE this, thank you ty ty ty ty for the update, I was so giving up on this and then WHAM updates YAY! ty ty ty, as always this is a fantastic fic, I like the whole interaction between Naru and Sasu and then Sai and Naru and it always makes me laugh when Sasu and Sai get pissed with one another over Naru lol, too cute, anyhow loved this and sooo cant wait for another one and what is up with Sakura??? At first I was thinking she was jealous, first I thought she might have a thing for Naru, then a thing for Sai and there for was pissed to THINK they had been sleeping together, but then the whole Sasuke doll thing threw me, why is she obsessed with the fact that Sai made Naru a Sasu doll??? Sai said she would get one to just not THAT one...hmmmmmm does she know he is REAL??? cant wait to find out, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very awesome. just so you know, this story is the reason i started checking aff for updates every day again. so...i like updates. especially of totally awesome stories. and i vote that sai should turn into a super-huge yaoi fanboy cuz that would be hilarious. i would also like to hurt tsunade for hurting naruto. she will get the karma backlash somehow right? can't wait for next update!