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by AkashaEmily

person CkA
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute and fascinating!
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing - I have NEVER read a storyline like this. I can't wait to read more. Both of their reactions to the situation seem very real... like this is how the actual naru and sasu would react.
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is truly too cute for words. A tiny Sasuke is adorable. I hope Sasuke's plan to 'turn-Naruto-Gay' succeeds. I definitely see Sasuke as an uke in this fanfic. Please update soon.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You're amazing!!!
This is absolutly by far my favorite fic, right now! It's even at the top over my recommended fics on my profile, because damn, you're writing beats the crap out of almost every writer here at AFF. I'm almost speachless...
I really like this story because it's one of a kind, cause I spend a lot of my free time here at AFF reading fics, and the thing that bothers me is fics with the same concept and idea, cause it gets pretty boring in the long run. That's why I absolutly love your fic. It's so realistic, which I totally love about a fic, and it's funny and charimg, and it's really enjoyable to read. I don't have a single negative thing to say about this fic because there isn't one.
And I also like the fact that the smut/smex between Sasuke and Naruto is put on a hold, sort of speak, that they have to realise their feelings for one and another before that will happen, which according to me only adds to the amazingness of this fic, cause I hate it when they just get down to buisness the first time they see each other, so thank you for not doing that! But I am expecting a lemon though...in later chapters.. ;P *smirk*
Anyway, keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so anxouis about it, who will win the rat or Sasuke? XD lol.
Don't wait too long with the update.
Take care. Hugs
*gives you cakes and cookies*
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An update! I missed this story so much. This was sooo good. I could feel Sasuke's heartbreak when Naruto said he wasn't gay... and then all the beautiful descriptions of his feelings... the world without color. Darn... that's just good stuff.
And what a way to end it. Sasuke and the rodent of unusual size... at least for him.
I am looking forward to the next.
person Houseki
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'lo! I am thoroughly enjoying 'Scale' and can't wait to see what happens to Sasuke in the next chapter! I hope Sasuke's past is completely revealed (such as the way he escaped, and how Oro got him to his size in the first place). Sasuke yelling out how he missed Naruto was absolutely adorable! I hope Sasuke opens up more to Naruto as this goes on.. and I kind of hope he stays small for the majority of this hehe I like Sasuke being more on the "helpless" side of their relationship :p Good job, and keep 'em coming!

~Houseki
person KT
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic! can't wait to read more!
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! So much to say!!

This chapter was great! The menacing rat at the end was fantastic. Hopefully the mini-epic battle between Uchiha and rat won't cause his secret to spill out from under the couch! (hehehe) I loved the aspect of Naruto's seeming homophobia. It sounded more like a justification from blonde to cover up his denial rather than actual hatred based homophobia to me, but then again, I'm not a boy who's hopes were just all crushed like Sasuke was. Naruto's reaching was great. Also... pet spider?? Too freaking funny. Keep up the great work. ^^
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really cute! I like that you've thought about the little things, like the dangers to sasuke's little body, the difference in sound, and everything! Sasuke's crush on Naruto and reactions to things he does are really cute, too. I really can't wait to read more and see what happens next! What do Sakura and Hinata want this time? And will Sasuke's fight with the rat call attention to him? Will the jutsu ever wear off? Will Naruto ever put aside his homophobia long enough to realize he loves sasuke?? (i mean, come on, it's obvious no matter what he claims >.>) Please continue (soon)!
person shadowphoenix143
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story in really awesome so far! Sakura and Hinata have the worse freaking timing! It's too bad Naruto is in denial about his feelings, that is going to make things even more complicated then they already are! I'm excited about reading more!