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by sameyler

schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it have been while since i review, i was so busy.lol. anyway i love this chapter!!
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!! That is just 'Oh so hot!!!!' and SMEXY!!!!!! You did it again!! You have a knack with Gaara/Neji or sometimes Neji/Gaara. I'm sorry HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Congratulations on your 21st Birthday!!!!!!!!!! Did you win alot of money at the Casino???!!! Till next time.
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well!! What's up with Kakashi not knowing about Sasuke. Did Naruto let the cat out of the bag?!!! Now Sasuke is going to make Naruto listen to his explanations about his love for him and maybe tell him 'the plan'. When will Sai let Kankuro into his heart is he playing hard to get?!!! I just love this!!!!!!!!
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO!! That didn't hardly suck that was Great!!! We all love Sasu/Naru smut!!! WOOHOO!!!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! That was ABSOLUTELY GREAT!!!!!!! Thank you so much!!! Man you wrote that like a PRO!!!!!! Can't wait for the tables to turn for them next chapter. Neji will be so great as a Seme. I can't wait to find out what these plans are for helping Naruto and the gang.
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I started to read your story and found it hard to do with the way you have it formated, the caps and the runing on of character talk in one paragrah, if you'd like I'd go through and fix what I said above, I can't spell very well but if I see any mistakes I'll fix them too. It seemed interesting and I don't mean this as a flame in anyway I just want to offer my help if you'd like it. my email is kimjohnston20@yahoo.com send me a email if you'd like my help. Thanks.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering my comments. I just so love this story. I can't wait for the Neji/Gaa Smex. So you've paired Kaka/Iruk too, Nice. Things are getting a little deeper with the story line. Can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like this story so far and the characters in it. You don't read many if any prison fanfics this is definitely one to keep up with.
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK! There's alot going on here which is exciting. I like that you've added characters that are hardly EVER used.
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH!!!!! You added Gaara!!! I hope you pair him with my man Neji!!! I love that pairing!!!!!