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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOH!! LEMONS!!! Will Neji be paired with anybody else? As well as Sai??
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so you've got Gaara and Neji and Kiba and Shino. This is so exciting because you have Itachi in it too. There are alot of questions about Sasuke and the way he's acting. Can't wait to find out about it. Oh and I like Iruka's character. What is he the prison counselor or something? He's so sweet to Naruto he needs a friend right now.
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it alright, my comment was the sex scent is hot!! how nice of ur friend offer to beta the story. the story to me have a good chance to be one of the best i have even read!!!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really need to consider getting a beta. Your grammatical errors bothered me so much that I didn't even make it past the first paragraph. :(
What a shame.
What a shame.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if u looking for beta go to: http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showforum=82, hope it will help
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks, i agree that you need beta, it is not hard to find one here, you can request one
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the story but it hurt my eyes, can you as least give it some more space?? the story is so hard to read but keep up!