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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. That cliffie was evil!
I cannot believe that Neji is actually going to tell Raidou what's going on - there's so much more to the story than Neji knows (at least I feel this way) that, undoubtedly, Neji is going to mess up somewhere.
update!
I cannot believe that Neji is actually going to tell Raidou what's going on - there's so much more to the story than Neji knows (at least I feel this way) that, undoubtedly, Neji is going to mess up somewhere.
update!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
: D
Lurv it!
I wants sum MOAR!
'Next time you should pinch it...' lol!
Lurv it!
I wants sum MOAR!
'Next time you should pinch it...' lol!
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great first two chapters! I really like where this is going. I'm usually a Shikamaru Seme and a neji Uke fan but either way works for me! Keep up the good work!
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this is your first! I luv it and can't wait for more. Please update soon!!!! Thanks for sharing. :D
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 is quite an adventure. I like squirming!Neji and bratty!Shikamaru, I'm delighted at your OOC characterizations for them. I wonder which of them will ultimately take the initiative and address his curiosities about the other first?
Personally, were I either of them I wouldn't wait long. They are both so ultra-hot and sexy it's downright frightening.
Personally, were I either of them I wouldn't wait long. They are both so ultra-hot and sexy it's downright frightening.
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused. Is the bit about Shika's wallet Nara catching Neji checking him out or something else?
Other than that great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Other than that great story! Can't wait for the next update!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. XD Neji's discomfort and guilt is so-- well, "adorable" probably isn't a good word to use, but adorable! It makes me "awww" with amused delight. ♥
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter. I'm really starting to enjoy this fic! Keep them comin'!!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh!
Poor Neji, he was TOLD to do the worst Hyuuga Clan SIN ! xDD
And he confessed to Hiashi?
Oh man, that's hilarious. xDD
...But how dare that granpa laugh at him!! ... Hehehe.. xD
And who would've thought that Neji would go to his Sensei for help?
It's kinda adorable, really.
This stoic Hyuuga Neji is actually a confused young man who needs some guidance. Cute. xD
Really good chapter! It was funny and in a way, adorable. xD
I like that Neji can go to his Sensei to talk.
And the disk that magically turns Gai a normal (or, as normal as he can be) person is just great. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Great fic.
Poor Neji, he was TOLD to do the worst Hyuuga Clan SIN ! xDD
And he confessed to Hiashi?
Oh man, that's hilarious. xDD
...But how dare that granpa laugh at him!! ... Hehehe.. xD
And who would've thought that Neji would go to his Sensei for help?
It's kinda adorable, really.
This stoic Hyuuga Neji is actually a confused young man who needs some guidance. Cute. xD
Really good chapter! It was funny and in a way, adorable. xD
I like that Neji can go to his Sensei to talk.
And the disk that magically turns Gai a normal (or, as normal as he can be) person is just great. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Great fic.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Something WAS definitely off. Yes, I had to say that too. xD
''Neji needed to report back to the Hokage.
Right after he got rid of his erection.''
Hehe. xD
Neji's such a good shinobi.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
''Neji needed to report back to the Hokage.
Right after he got rid of his erection.''
Hehe. xD
Neji's such a good shinobi.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!