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for The Art of Comedy Combat

by PrinceofPervs

schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great saskue is now going to be going around saying things like "what a pity" or "such a pity"
person Maddogg
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Loved it. but your going to give Sasuske Laharl's personality?... could be interesting. Good story so far though.
person NarutosBrat
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Umm, seems to me that Lee's Inner Imp might be a certain beer chuggin, ass kicking, Stone Cold Stunning SOB.

Just to be funny, you should make Shikamaru's Inner Imp be someone super hyper, and Gaara's someone perky.
person NarutosBrat
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention this, but I think it would be hilarious if Lee Stone Cold Stunned Gaara.
person voltron-x
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a bit strange but absolutely hysterical. Is that Stone Cold Rock Lee?! And Sasuke's inner half couldn't possibly be a certain short, blue haired imp of an overlord could it? XP
person Drake 64
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i've got to say, i really like this story and the way you have tweaked everyone. and nice touch, Stone Cold make's a good inner self for, i think
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was entertaining so i could i ask for Shion from the Shippuuden movie to join the harem
person me
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story so far. how is ino going to pixie? shes already bitchy so will she become sweet, or just a funny bitch?
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, what a hoot!!. though Hinata`s way of fighting, well let`s just say I heartily aree with Kankuro, if that`s the wa she fights. On the other hand I cannot imagine the bijou controlled jinchuuriki Gaara using the art of Comed Fighting , I just do not see them.Lee`s inner imp is gonna be somebod who understad no joke, since he already acts idiotically. Sakura ... don`t know. Where`s the problem is Naruto doesn`t escape Hinata, the lucky beggar...
person FluffyNevyn
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're evil, i recognize that laughter. Anyway, good story, write the lemon scene that we are all waiting for, then get evil..or perhaps do both in one chapter =D