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for Naughty Nympho Ninjas III

by lexjamandme

schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*has tears running down her face* I have to follow up behind THAT. I almost want to run away from the challenge but as I said before I am not trying to win just trying to atone for my craptastic first fic and pull Menma into the limelight a little. So here is you a greater writer I only HOPE my one shot measures up to a FOURTH of this fic. As always thank you for another wonderful story. *sniffs and takes a breath poking her chest out* I can still do this *knees shake* I'm a woman I can do this...I hope. Ja!
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, wow..*huggles* I love your writing style! You're always good at showing how much Sasuke and Naruto love eachother..and not in the cheesy way! I look forward to anything else you put out =D

Haha, and the yoda line at the end..haha, I couldn't stop laughing..lol..
person Zrina
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O

I think I need to go change my panties now... <_<

Loved the improvised dialogue for the porn movie though!! Total classic! hehehehe

Wonderful as always and not just the smex. Nicely written and I love the interaction between the two! XD
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dives into a pool filled with ice cubes* HOLY RA!!!!
person Word_Slave
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What's happening hotstuff?
I love this fic, it's just perfect and I'm so humbled that you wanted me to 'help' you with it. I love you madly. Thanks for the sanity you bring!
Slave
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just for taking one of my favorite movies (star wars collection) and turning it around you get to be the ultimate for life. and if any one gives you any trouble just know that you have your own fangirl who is willing to kick ass take names and die for you. i love your stories that much. thanks for taking up the challenge and hope that this means you are getting your mojo together to write another blazin sasu x naru multi-chapter fic.