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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fundoshi... *drools* Brilliant! Jiraiya/Naruto is such a treat to find *_* (hard as well!) I'll look forward to more of your stories in the future!
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jesus...I had to check out that guy wearing the fundoshi you wanted to lick and I looked and I saw exactly why. That guy had a great ass(nice legs too)! Oh and by the way, awesomely hot story!
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn.
Perhaps the best Jiraiya/Naruto smut I've read in... well, forever. I'd leave a long, involved review about the all the things I loved, but I'm about to throw up on my keyboard so maybe some other time.
Loved the Jiraiya/Minato hints and I thought you owned Jiraiya's characterization. Would've liked to see more of Naruto's, but I'll take what I can get.
Awesome one-shot, wouldn't mind seeing it continued. ;3 Either way looking forward to more from you, as you're one of the few writers on AFF net that doesn't write porn like a horny third grader. Kudos.
Much love,
Ella
Perhaps the best Jiraiya/Naruto smut I've read in... well, forever. I'd leave a long, involved review about the all the things I loved, but I'm about to throw up on my keyboard so maybe some other time.
Loved the Jiraiya/Minato hints and I thought you owned Jiraiya's characterization. Would've liked to see more of Naruto's, but I'll take what I can get.
Awesome one-shot, wouldn't mind seeing it continued. ;3 Either way looking forward to more from you, as you're one of the few writers on AFF net that doesn't write porn like a horny third grader. Kudos.
Much love,
Ella
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fucking awesome read! best jiraiya x naru i've read in a while. thanks for sharing!
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and if you thought the wikipedia guy wearing the fundoshi was hot, check out the guy demonstrating how to tie it.
http://www.geocities.com/sg_tiger.geo/fundoshi.html
now that's some meat worth tasting. (^_^) have a nice day!
http://www.geocities.com/sg_tiger.geo/fundoshi.html
now that's some meat worth tasting. (^_^) have a nice day!