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for Innocence Taken (itasaku)

by naptownbaby

person Kakarika
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hm...You should probably make up your mind. A friend of mine mentioned something to me once and your story made me remember it. Though it was originally directed at Yami no Matsuei fanfictions. "The only reason there's so many willing Hisoka x Muraki fanfics is because most authors are too much of a pussy to write rape." Itachi x Sakura is similar in the mortal enemies department. You did believeable in the first part but it seems, as my friend puts it, you 'pussied out' in the second. No one gets raped and then lets the person be close to them. That's just retarded. No matter the situation. Especially if that person tramatically scarred the one they were in love with in the first place.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you better update sooner, I was so worried that u wouldnt update or continue this story, it is really good and one of very firsts Itachi/sakura and naruto fanfic i have evr read and it was very interesting to my virgin mind..lol. I know how busy life can be but plz dont forsake this story, it is really well written.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say she should say....YEESSS ITACHI!!!!! lol -blushes-
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I soooooooooo love this story, please keep it coming, and oh gosh i am so twisted in the way i want the lemon between them both. So please lol, and update soon. keep up the good work.
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...You gotta update soon. lol