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for Break the Ice

by LindyStar

person lara5170
schedule September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, if only it could have been longer.
person RamenIshLove
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Geez. That got me hot. Lol. I want more. I love the idea of Sasuke being so inexperienced... It just turns me on so much.
person rendia
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Loved your story. It was cute and hot, and i liked the fact that you kept it less serious.

There was one thing, though, that bothered me... THEY DIDNT KISS! Not once! I was on the edge of my seat going 'kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss' I have a kiss-fetish I guess xD And kissing is just way hot, sometimes hotter than the sex itself. So I was a bit let down I didnt see any =(

But other than that, I loved it!! And now I'm gunna go read some of your other works =]