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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
xD that was awesome.. I mean the whole idea of the lawn thingy ... oh my god.. xD i am still so shocked lol Well great job.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! i didn't know if i should review here, or over on y!gallery, but i decided here was as good as place as any, ne?
this is... hawt.
i love the dynamics in the characters, their relationships with one another. it's thoughtful, realistic and very interesting. i like the complex web you wove to give them depth, to make them more than just fanfiction characters, if you know what i mean?
i adore the way you wrote sasuke. he's so cute and pouty. i want to hug him! he's the perfect uchiha on the outside, but inside, he's quite a little ball of angst. and naruto. he's quite tasty in this and the perfect counter to sasuke. they are so incredible together. they fit together and it's wonderful to see. i really like that it reads that they've been together for a long time, that they know each other so very well. it makes them much more believable.
and then, there's the smut. that incredible smut that was... drool-worthy. sasuke was fighting a losing battle if he seriously thought he could resist the sexiness that is naruto. i really like that naruto was coercing sasuke, but never so much that it could be forced. sasuke wanted it, he just wanted to be a stubborn bastard. and i think he likes the thrill of the chase, you know? anyways, i got sidetracked. wow! sasuke did a reach around, and it was delicious! i loved it! it made me happy. you never get to see it and you brought it back, and made it so hot.
it made me wish i was there with a video camera, recording every wonderful moment.
you did a wonderful job love! and i'm so faving this over on y!
<3
~hanyou-elf
this is... hawt.
i love the dynamics in the characters, their relationships with one another. it's thoughtful, realistic and very interesting. i like the complex web you wove to give them depth, to make them more than just fanfiction characters, if you know what i mean?
i adore the way you wrote sasuke. he's so cute and pouty. i want to hug him! he's the perfect uchiha on the outside, but inside, he's quite a little ball of angst. and naruto. he's quite tasty in this and the perfect counter to sasuke. they are so incredible together. they fit together and it's wonderful to see. i really like that it reads that they've been together for a long time, that they know each other so very well. it makes them much more believable.
and then, there's the smut. that incredible smut that was... drool-worthy. sasuke was fighting a losing battle if he seriously thought he could resist the sexiness that is naruto. i really like that naruto was coercing sasuke, but never so much that it could be forced. sasuke wanted it, he just wanted to be a stubborn bastard. and i think he likes the thrill of the chase, you know? anyways, i got sidetracked. wow! sasuke did a reach around, and it was delicious! i loved it! it made me happy. you never get to see it and you brought it back, and made it so hot.
it made me wish i was there with a video camera, recording every wonderful moment.
you did a wonderful job love! and i'm so faving this over on y!
<3
~hanyou-elf
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was fuckin hot. more please.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I am here too!
Ah, this was sweetness love!
Ignore the hard time I gave you, I really liked this. It was wonderful and in character on both counts. That scores huge points in this fandom...well, to me anyway.
I was totally jealous of the old pervs and their eye-candy access. I wanted to watch moisture slide down hot chests too!
I especially loved the bit of angst there, as it concerns Sasuke's jealousy over Naruto's center-of-attention-ness. It feels like a little bit of canon shining through. Thankfully though, this time it lead to very hot sex, instead of defecting form your village, bent on revenge.
*YOU SEE THAT KISHIMOTO!! THAT'S HOW YOU DO IT!!"
*cough* but as i was saying. Very well done. An instant fave.
P.S. Is it wrong that one of my favourite parts was your author's note? NaruSasu forever babe!!
Ah, this was sweetness love!
Ignore the hard time I gave you, I really liked this. It was wonderful and in character on both counts. That scores huge points in this fandom...well, to me anyway.
I was totally jealous of the old pervs and their eye-candy access. I wanted to watch moisture slide down hot chests too!
I especially loved the bit of angst there, as it concerns Sasuke's jealousy over Naruto's center-of-attention-ness. It feels like a little bit of canon shining through. Thankfully though, this time it lead to very hot sex, instead of defecting form your village, bent on revenge.
*YOU SEE THAT KISHIMOTO!! THAT'S HOW YOU DO IT!!"
*cough* but as i was saying. Very well done. An instant fave.
P.S. Is it wrong that one of my favourite parts was your author's note? NaruSasu forever babe!!
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! It was perfect!
The writing style, the emotions and Naruto shirtless? PERFECT! You really gave us a twist when you revealed they were boyfriends, but I must admit that made this one-shot that much more believable and extra cute. I love the original idea, and the fact that they didn't make it to the shower was hilarious. The smex was super hott. I absolutely love how you incorporated all these aspects into your one-shot. It was a really good read.
I'll be on the look out for more stories. Naruto-seme all the way :)
The writing style, the emotions and Naruto shirtless? PERFECT! You really gave us a twist when you revealed they were boyfriends, but I must admit that made this one-shot that much more believable and extra cute. I love the original idea, and the fact that they didn't make it to the shower was hilarious. The smex was super hott. I absolutely love how you incorporated all these aspects into your one-shot. It was a really good read.
I'll be on the look out for more stories. Naruto-seme all the way :)
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aikage, Aikage! This was wonderful! I am so glad you posted. I wish the landccapers in my neighborhood were this hot. Whew. The lemon was so good. And the manual stuff on Naruto! Yeah! You never see that in lemons, but it's so hot! And the interaction afterwards cracked me up. *does a happy dance*