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for Insomniac's Dream

by ilikeyoursocks

person I.Drowned.My.Goldfish
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just pointing out a slight mistake. Apparently it's cause of your Iruka/Itachi problem in chapter 12 ;)

But, with Kakashi…things were different. While they hadn’t known each other for very long, Kakashi had already dedicated his life to his new lover. And now…dropping the “L” word…

Then again, it was preceded by “think.” If Itachi were to dedicate himself to another man—

Love the story, please update soon :)
person Nanin
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You updated!!!
I barely have time to read, and I'm glad I came just in time. :}
(I see things are speeding up!)

Side note- Aww, it's awesome you've meet someone just for you. n_n
(still in search :{ ) *raises hand*
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you Spastic!!! Is that what you wanted to hear? Well, its true! I love this story and I so cant wait for more as Im spazzing out right now. lol.
person hisoka
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
phone sex,sound so odd but im sure itll be tried soon just wondering who will initiate it.im surprised that theyre only apart for 2 weeks dont films take longer than that unless your actually taking all day to and sometimes night to do them?sasuke comes back the 15th of june ne,thats just the day after my birth so odd.well hope you can update soon
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EEEH! Phone sex! I'm looking foreward to it! ^^
person hisoka
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is that sasukes only dark secret if so than hes lucky thats all that happened.kiba and hinata married,why doesnt she want her family to know do they not approve that always sucks.itachis creaping me out nice sleep bet naruto would have had a better one if he werent being watched.glad you updated hope you can update again soon
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story, love the suspense with Itachi. One question about Gaara's father. In the scene where he takes Kimi to the hospital he says he owns the hospital and is a famous doctor, but in the next chapter when Temari is mothering Gaara it suggests it is because he is a deadbeat drunk. Do they have different fathers? If they are the same which is he or is he both? Maybe more than one question. Thanks Morlana
person exo88
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story, it's funny as hell, I find myself chuckling most of the time. And even with the slight OOC:ness at times, it's... just great.

Oh, and you probably already know, but there was one misplaced Itachi in the latest chapter:

"Then again, it was preceded by “think.” If Itachi were to dedicate himself to another man—"

That's all, please keep updating when you have the time/energy/inspiration and I'll keep on reading! And feel free to check out my "Back to School", I have a feeling you'd like it.
person Leeana69
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm....Seems like an excellent fic. Let's just see how this progresses shall we?

....I meant that in the best possible way, btw. XD;;
person hisoka
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
everones life sems to be going smoothly excpy itachi of orse.hope you can update soon