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for Insomniac's Dream

by ilikeyoursocks

schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was nice to see an update. I like the little looks into everyone's life.
Can't wait for more.

Oh, and I really just want Itachi to grow a set and go get Kisame back. *waiting as patiently as possible*
person hisoka
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
itachis some kind of tyrant(i think thats the right word)he really doesnt want sasuke to be happy with naruto(obviously)whats crawled up his ass and died hope you can update soonb
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Itachi ruining Sasuke's good time.
I'm glad that Naruto didn't puke on live TV, though it might have been entertaining.
I love bowling; I'm glad that was their date.
Don't feel too bad... I kick my husband's ass every time we go bowling.
I hope Itachi doesn't do anything to Sasuke.
I'll have to crawl through the computer to kick his ass if he does!
person Nanin
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel the love ;D

I love this chapter!
It's downright cute and romantic.
It made my day!
I litterally jumped out of my seat and started skipping around with techno music in the background.
(Yeah I'm a little odd.)
Please update soon!
I really want to see what happens next!
person zanax
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that is so cute (the story, not your bowling :P)

I wonder what else you have in store for us!

Update soon!

PS: Obama08! :P
person dark
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
actually i was not thinking aww how cute i was thinking wow not one can be that bad i just lafgh.
But serioslly i totally lovin this st so far is so great, that i can not find nothing bat to say about it.

G.L.
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“But I just got out of the closet,” Naruto whined. I LOLed so hard from that line! XD This is an awesome story. I hope to see more soon-ish, no hurries.
person zanax
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honey...mmm... I prefer maple syrup :P

That chapter was so good!

Update soon!
person hisoka
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow,that would be a really useful power to make people see what you want them to but it would suck if you couldnt control it...maybe ill just take up drawing real things so i can show people what i mean,or describe them real simple and such.im wondering how this is gonna go with them on tv wonder if itachis gonna go to,and make things hell somehow.hope you can update soon
person Nanin
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There always is a sad ending in most fanfictions. *sigh*
But it's for the best I guess.

I laughed my head off at the 'I barely came out of the closet'.
And the smutty scene was pretty hot.
It'll be the best job ever to be paid for writting smut x3

Can't wait 'till the next chapter!