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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm intrigued. but you haven't gotten into the story enough for me to know whether or not i like it yet. what's from the first chapter? and what's wrong with naruto? questions to be answered, hmmmm? haha. please update as soon as you can. you've gotten me curious and that's a good thing.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It sounds decent and you have good writing technique. If I had an idea of why the bird was after Naruto and why Sasuke told Naruto he was destined to save the world I could give better feed back.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wha... what the hell is going on??!!?? o_Ô
keep up the good work.
keep up the good work.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is this a preview of the beginning or some undisclosed part in the story. i am curious as to what sasuke's role of protector is. is he a supernatural being that is protecting naruto who is a normal boy or naruto who is a supernatural being who doesn't know it. i would like to at least see the whole first chapter so i hope you continue writing this story.